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Daddy Teach Me
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Daddy Teach Me |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Sing me a lullaby daddy I know you don’t like to Afraid you can’t sing well enough Neither could Bob Dylan And he was a poet too Tell me a bedtime tale Daddy you weave them oh so well Hansel and Gretel Where oh silly daddy Did you come up with names as those? Pray with me daddy Teach me how to pray I’m just a little girl now But I’ll be big someday I know you’re afraid the words won’t come Daddy foreshadows in your eyes Your sweet princess till kingdom come Daddy there’s solace that you’re wise You pat my back while I suck my thumb [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Walt~ This is what good daddies do .... 'Pray with me daddy Teach me how to pray I’m just a little girl now But I’ll be big someday' What love in your heart you have shared. *Hugs* to a sweet daddy !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW Walt, this is such a touching poem... no looks like a perfect song for little kids to sing on and on, again and again.... Beautiful... Regards, sudhir |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is so sweet and loving.... what a wonderful read this is! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Walty, you're such a sweet Daddy this is especially beautiful *hugs* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx all very much |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Memories recalled by the Pen of Walt. Very nice |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You are multi-faceted, Walt! This is a keeper, save it for when your child grows up! Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx jamie and corinne yuh hansel and gretel i kinda made that story up one nite yuh know |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Even WAY OUT there...you can still manage to make me smile.... This is so sweet and so cute. I adore it! I think I'll pass this to my Dad! Thanks Walt for making me smile tonight!  ~Sheri |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So touching, What a good Dad you are. Writing about family is precious. Jenn E |
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