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A dream?
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A dream? |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
A dream... Or was it a dream? Was it a trick of the mind? I do not know I am unsure Is it? Or is it not meant to be? Tendrils of what may be a dream Slipping through my fingers Leaving me with doubt __________________ Hope everyone enjoys this... this is my first poem that I have ever posted...! Lizzie Henry |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Artistic/Lizzie~ Welcome to Passions ! What a pleasure to have you join the greatest family of poets and friends on the web.  'Tendrils of what may be a dream' ... I like this line a lot. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Marge- Thank you for the kind welcome... glad you appreciated the poem! Enjoying your poems so far... wow!  Thanks...  ~Artistic~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Artistic(Lizzie) WELCOME TO PASSIONS Tendrils of what may be a dream Slipping through my fingers Leaving me with doubt .... lovely lines there... a beautiful first post... I hope your stay here is enjoyable and that I get to read more from you... regards, sudhir |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hi Lizzie - I like your first post - I like your name - I like your entree... I know you'll enjoy yourself here - It's a wonderfully Passionate Place - Welcome, and check your email for a special greeting..  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Artistic, welcome to Passions. As you'll soon see this is one great family. Loved your poem. Best wishes, Juls |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Everyone... here's a poem in response to your kind welcomes, thank you so much! Kind welcomes Makes one feel at home Kind compliments Makes one feel good Kind friends and family That one can appreciate Thank you all! Sudhir... I'm glad u enjoyed the poem... Nan... thanks for the kind email and welcome..! Juliet_2u... thanks for the welcome...! I think I look forward to spending my time here...! ~Artistic~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well well well.....I thought I was coming in for a treat to one poem and I got two instead...I got the timing thing down...yeah baby...(oops sorry)....WELCOME TO PASSIONS and what a wonderful first post....I look forward to many more of yours in the future.  I'm having so much fun tonite!!!!!! oohhhh yeahhhh.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to passions Lizzie...as you will soon find out this is an addicting site....love your first post |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome Artistic. . . this was a wonderful first post!! Looking forward to more from you. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Hi There! Welcome, you will never want to leave here. Great first post, so full of emotion. Will look to see more of you!!! Yipeeeeeeeee, Oh man, I am hyper tonight! SMILE!!! Jenn E |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Mark- Tee! Thanks for the compliment... glad you liked it Paula... Sven... Jenn... thank you... I've seen some of your poems and have enjoyed them! If anyone else ever reads this poem... I'd love some feedback on what you get/see from this poem. Thanks! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
a big welcome to you Artistic ... nice entry, as well ... loads of great poets on this board ... read - write - read - write, etc ... have fun and welcome again ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What I see is a love trying to blossom and one or both of the involved are unsure as to whether or not to let go of their fears. I see one ready to grasp and take the chance and the other still holding back. I may be way off base here and if I am then so it is. Either way I liked the verse and your promise as a poet already shines. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Artistic/Lizzie-Welcome!-A very lovely piece. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions  I can't wait to read more! |
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