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Broken Heart |
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sweetkoko84 New Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 1 |
A Broken Heart The thunder growls as the wind roars, and the rain pours bringing a swamp of sadness The swamp took my only possession Letting it sink down to the bottom like quicksand. This madness of searching for that one thing was lightning crossing each other path. Hopelessness looking for joy. A bridge that never cross it's gate to happiness. Where the sun shines and the flowers grow. What happens when love grows and then disappear that thunder starts again bringing rain that fllds your heart. How many times do we trust. Only to be played for a fool The snake of hatred has come to kill it's prey, making the possession weak from it's poison venom. Creating a barrier around the heart. Love will never come The pain unbearable to withstand The happiness wash away with the rain. A betrayal that hardens the heart, deviated into the wild, holding captive the key of forgiveness Who should be humiliated and abused and forsaken by one's love. Who deserve to have a broken heart? Surely not I! by K.O |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
How many times we share our thoughts and emotions. Only to have them used or taken away. You have explained it well. But the heart is always strongest..... Ken |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKOKO~ Welcome to Passions ! This was a good thought - 'The thunder growls' You will, no doubt, enjoy it here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Mmm... I like the poem... I can only sympathize... I especially liked this line... 'How many times do we trust. Only to be played for a fool?' lovely!  |
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