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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
Some months ago I asked for your hand, But now I wonder did you really understand? We have gone through the trials of one thing or another, From the violence of a purse snatching, To both of us loving another. We have reached the highs and pondered the lows that three years have entailed. But what of the future? Is it heads or will it be tails? Feeling of laughter....sorrow and such Do you really understand Why I love you so much? So what will it be? Can you see how I've changed, or is it an illusion Hiding future chains? So what will it be? The many on the outside or will it be me? |
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oh2beme Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 215NV USA |
In reply to this I suggest that you in turn read "My Answer". And remember that I Love You! Debbie L. Hoskins |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Cavecanem! (I read her response ... and I think the answer is a resounding "you"). Lovely first post, hope to read more!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good first post...hope things work out for you.....welcome to Passions.......ethome.. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
CAVECANEM WELCOME TO PASSIONS and with a nice first post, you have made me look for more.... hope to read many more from you and hope you make yourself comfortable here ... regards, sudhir |
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CAVECANEM Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 43Nevada USA |
Ever had a frustrating day? along with a lousy night? Thoughts from work following you home Comments from your loved ones hoping to make you cheer, only to find that you can't hear So this I wrote one lousy night a little insecure poem on a insecure night. Thank you all for your comments, I admire you all......Ken |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ken* Welcome to Passions! You've posted a great opening piece and hope to read many more. This is a wonderful place to sort through your feelings. Great writing~ |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Welcome!!! I liked it, and Awwwwwwwwwwww to your words and her answer. Ok, I have to go read her answer now.... Good luck! Jenn E |
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