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Lover's Spell
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Lover's Spell |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Yon moon flies high this fine summer’s eve Time I deem for this spell to conceive Her heart shall beat; lungs draw breath once more Cold hand shall warm as I brave death's door From lover's moon I gather luminescent light Stars I steal so that her eyes shall be ever bright A field of roses shall provide the scent for her hair Mother Nature to make her skin soft beyond compare Two intertwined rose vines to signify husband and wife In the soft light of dawn I steal beauty to give her life The cool north wind shall give her everlasting breath Soft slanting rays from the sun to wake her from death And last of all I place in her heart a small twinkling glow That thing from my own heart that some call a soul sorry about the title...just can't make up my mind... < !signature--> "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ [This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
wonderful poem. keep up the great work!  "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
thanks for the comment "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Wow nice poem. Had I read that out of a textbook I would have assumed it to be 14th-15th century. I like the usage of words and the imagery you gave. A very beautiful poem |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Thank you for the very kind reply...it was very much appreciated.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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