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JamesMichael
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0 posted 08-08-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Her smile

She told me
to relax and wait awhile
so I count the days
til again I'll see my sweethearts smile.
As I hesitate
precious thoughts fill my mind.
Why must I wait
a finer women I will never find.
God please
open up those precious heavens above
and shower me
in her sweet Love.
Soak me good thru and thru
please Lord I'm telling you.
Without her smile
life is incomplete.
With her smile
my life is sweet.
Yes I will admit
I Love her wit and style.
Still I hope the day
in not too far away
when I can linger in her smile.

Jameslee@August08,2000
ThingsIadmireaboutLena



[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 08-08-2000).]
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Paula Finn
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1 posted 08-08-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

Such a lucky lady
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 08-08-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh James ... Lena is one lucky lady to have stolen your heart so. Beautiful words of anticipation and longing. Very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
JamesMichael
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3 posted 08-09-2000 03:36 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Paula and Kit...I appreciate your kind words...as always I am the one that is blessed...James
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 08-09-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

A very nice poem you have here Jimmy. You always seem to know the right words to say, when it comes to love.

Peace.

Nathan
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 08-09-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh my, it sounds like a man in love to me....smiling here for you big time  
Salooma
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6 posted 08-09-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Salooma   Email Salooma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Salooma

so sweet and she's lucky to have that! good luck...

salooma
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


7 posted 08-09-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Hi jmlee12345,
This is telling me that there is a true love. I wish you the best, and another great writing that you have done.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 08-11-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Nate, Hoot Owl, Salooma, and Bill for the nice comments...
Yes Hoot Owl a man in Love...now all I need is a woman in Love...will Lena be the one...tune in next week for new developments...ha..ha..I can only hope...and pray...and wait...James
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 08-11-2000 06:34 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Excellent poetry, my friend, James...

all in love, eh??? good for you... hope that this is one just a small part of a blooming love story

regards,
sudhir
JamesMichael
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10 posted 08-11-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes Sudhir I am falling in Love and I hope she comes in with me...I hope Love blossoms also...we shall see...James
JamesMichael
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11 posted 07-19-2005 06:31 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lena didn't work out for me...but it was fun trying...I still see her around occasionally.
James
 
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