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August Melody (Haiku)
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August Melody (Haiku) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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August Melody Trees sway to and fro The wind sings a melody August plays her part Angel of Darkness 9/8/2000 [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Perfect!!! Love this Maree! And I know these are not easy to do!  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, written a month in the future, glad i had the lucky chance to preview this! It's great. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
August is real hot To Aussies it may be not Walt has b-day yuh! great serene poem love it haikus you do well |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful Maree. It seems you make every form of poetry your own. Welcome to Haikuers Anonymous Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DA~ this is so very nice  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleDarkAngel~ So very lovely are the phrases from your pen You - Haiku - again ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Gorgeous my friend! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very beautiful. Not much more to say to something so lovely. Jenn E |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You sure do find a form and master it don't you? Excellent! I see you've taken on a fondness for Haiku's <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey!! Thank You all so very much for your kind replies and for taking the time to read I appreciate it so very much... and Angel, yes a likin g to Haiku's they are fun to do |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed the "succintness" of this haiku...looking forward to reading more from you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Kaile,This must've been on page 20 lol Thanks so much for reading, your lovely comment, and for bringing it back up again Much appreciated! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark Angel sings out In Haiku's bold and lovely Speaks in poets's voice Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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