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butterfly dreams ... |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
butterfly dreams ... sparkling wings of blue and gold rains a shimmer upon our hold left behind to fly no more butterfly dreams seek to soar summer's season so utterly brief life's work awing with no relief from north above farther cooling north to southern light's warming warmth numbers so vast on journey's start dwindles to few who have the heart let wings sparkle their mazen shimmer butterfly dreams fly on to glimmer M.A. Miller 08.08.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
MA Miller.. I must say that this has such a soft beautiful flow, just like the butterflies it portrays..... I really appreciate the images here....... A most enjoyable read! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tender teasing beauty you have given us...WOnderfully said and we all love our little butterflies don't we.  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It's so sad when the butterflies leave and the snow comes, but it brings me warmth knowing they've flown on for others to enjoy Great poem. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed your light imaging here, also, and the cadence of your accentual verse. Lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks to all for reading ... just a simple thought, but MB, you're right ... we all love our butterflies ... thanks again ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MAMiller~ What a lyrically lovely flutter on wing. 'numbers so vast on journey's start dwindles to few who have the heart let wings sparkle their mazen shimmer butterfly dreams fly on to glimmer' We often think of the fragility of the butterfly ... and yet their strength is what takes them as far as it does. Beautifully rendered. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...in my minds eye I can see the monarchs ...this is beautiful |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very beautiful poem here. For a simple thought it is a great one. Jenn E |
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Roostr1 New Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3Flagstaff, Az. USA |
Very nice. The use of images is good. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! another lovely piece of work from my friend MA.... exquisite imagery... regards, sudhir |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks all above ... i'm still amazed anyone reads my work, but to have real poets take the time is a blessing i never thought to see ... thanks again. |
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