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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-08 11:09 AM


Another time, another world
when all was new and free,
as souls began their lives
and found their partners in time,
all but the source was complete
for bodies were not needed,
freedom came in glances of light,
love was the one who shone bright.
Millenia have passed
and the stars have become one,
souls have taken their form
but still search for one love,
which will finnaly come to pass
as we all get the chance,
for love does never come late
when we at last find our soul mate.

© Copyright 2000 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-08-08 11:13 AM


ohh yes...all you have to do is say yes when you fnd them...I do so love the idea of a soulmate...wonderful write here Michael.

never say never

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-08-08 11:18 AM


I have to agree and I like how you put the idea across with this wonderful verse...very very good!
rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
3 posted 2000-08-08 11:23 AM


ethome,
  
    If only it was easy to find that soul mate.. but when you do it makes the wait worth while    Well written.

                       rosepetals

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-08-08 11:31 AM


as we all get the chance,
for love does never come late
when we at last find our soul mate.
=====================
indeed ... indeed
your just cranking them out of late arent you
must be well inspired  
later
me

Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

5 posted 2000-08-08 11:32 AM


"Another time, another world
when all was new and free,"

Michael, you have created a standing still of time here, with your words. A time within time. What a lovely way of expressing the existance of soul mates.

~ Claire


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Jenn E
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
6 posted 2000-08-09 03:17 AM


Ahh Michael,
How your words get to me. This was so beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you for making my heart smile.  

As Always
Jenn E

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