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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2000-08-08 10:21 AM



The sound of your laughter
your smile so bright
kissed by memories in dream
under gentle moonlight

Every detail so vivid
even your voice so true
in my dream I remembered
everything of you

I feel so lucky
to have had this time with you
kissed by memories in dream
if only you knew................

-SEA-

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 2000-08-08 10:29 AM


This is really lovely! It's so sentimental.
Here's to good dreams like this one  

ps how ya doing?? miss ya


<*\\\><

The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you.


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-08-08 10:29 AM


Now that is the kind of dream we all need.  Let that dream of yours know....it sounds like you could make it worthwhile.  Beautifully written and such tenderness.

kissed by memories in dream
if only you knew................

Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2000-08-08 10:34 AM


Sea... go for your dreams...this is lovely

never say never

poutprincess
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4 posted 2000-08-08 10:41 AM


"kissed by memories in dream
if only you knew"

oh this is lovely!
have someone id love to send this poem to...but then..he would know! and im too shy for that! LOL
this was much enjoyed!
~Dawn

whatcha doing in this darkness baby
when you know love will set you free?
will you stay in the sea forever
Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live

Michael G
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5 posted 2000-08-08 11:16 AM


take the dreams and make them true......... very good, very well writen.....
ethome
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6 posted 2000-08-08 11:21 AM


Fairy tales can come true
it can happen to you
if you're young at heart.

remember that commercial... well it's true make your dreams real....great work!

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-08-08 11:22 AM


SEA~
Hey there, girl.

Love it !
Makes me want to go back to bed !

Good to see you, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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rosepetals25
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8 posted 2000-08-08 11:25 AM


SEA,

      Dreams are wonderful aren't they? I really liked this poem Such good writing.

                rosepetals

SEA
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9 posted 2000-08-08 09:26 PM


WhtDove~ Hey lady! What's shakin? I'll e-mail you tonight.....glad you liked the poem  

Mark~thanks, I'm glad you liked  

Paula~thank you  

Poutprincess~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thank you  

Michael G~ thanks  

Ethome~yes, I remember that one, I forget what it goes to and now I'll think about it all night!   thanks  

Marge~ Hey! What's shakin with you? Thank you for the love it  

RP25~yes, they are, thank you  

-SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-08-08 09:30 PM


Hey sea-gator-girl
this is sweet softly sensual and sincere
lots of S words for Sea  
enjoyed this lil gem muchly
nice to see ya back
later-dream-gator
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-08-08 10:15 PM


So beautifully and tenderly rendered SEA ...  sweet and dreamy sentiments ... much enjoyed this lovely verse!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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