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Dreams of People Passing
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Dreams of People Passing |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Emotions inside me, I can't express when watching dreamers show tenderness. And dreams of people passing While watching and waiting, I sense for a while dreams growing within them, making them smile. The dreams of people passing. The girl with blue hair, has ethereal dreams to share Her breath spreads out dreams in the cold misty air. her dreams of people passing. You give me a coin, I give you a smile In catching your dreams. I do it with style. Those dreams of people passing. The man in the suit, whom I deem to be cute Has dreams that are sharp, vivid, astute His dreams of people passing. So I sit and I wait both early and late Collect dreams and gladly collate The dreams of people passing. Nobody notices me standing here What wonders, what passion, what beauty draws near In dreams of people passing. When day is over you've all gone home I sit in the darkness and, warmed, all alone by dreams of people's passing. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh this is great! we all do people watching...but you took it just that little step further...taking dreams from these passing strangers.. very very well done! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful visions your eyes have and I thank you for sharing them with us all. I think we all like to people watch in ways of our own and you have shown the beauty of your soul in what you see. Well written. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Kethry, This has an ethereal voyeurism to it that captures the mind. Transient dreams caught by your watchful eye. A beautiful poem that was a delight to read. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I use Jamie's words "Transient dreams caught by your watchful eye". I think that describes this best... nicely written poem... excellent... regards, sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kethry, this is a beauty, glad I found it over here.  Catalinamoon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ As a 'dream-catcher' ... you do a nice job ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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