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Silent soul
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0 posted 2000-08-08 12:57 PM


I dont know if i should post this here because of "hell" but oh well

when hell freezes over
will i ever be happy again you see
so just go away and let me be

when hell freezes over
will i ever feel like i mattered
its as if my life was glass and fell on the floor and shattered

when hell freezes over
will i ever be the same
its all my fault im the one to blame

when hell freezes over
will i ever again be strong
this life i no longer wanna live on

when hell freezes over
will i ever stop crying
i just keep thinking and thinking of dying

when hell freezes over
will you see a happy me
like i said before go away and let me be!

tell me what ya think!




peace <3
Silent
Life is to short to be pissed off all the time


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with you
1 posted 2000-08-08 01:05 AM


SS~ I've been there before.....I know how this feels, it gets better,honest. -SEA


(BTW~ this is a great poem)

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
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Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-08-08 01:11 AM


Well, The Eagles did tour again....
Seriously though.. like SEA said.. it gets less painful,,, it does not help to hear that I know, but until then..keep writing

Silent soul
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since 2000-06-10
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3 posted 2000-08-08 01:54 AM


thanks a bunch anymore comments


peace <3
Silent
Life is to short to be pissed off all the time


serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-08-09 10:45 PM


and yep sometimes hell does freeze over...but I admire the emotion behind this piece!
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