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Torn
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 9
Williamson

0 posted 2000-08-07 10:17 PM


You're washing away everything
The world means nothing to a dreamer
Their puppets on their strings on the TV screen
It means nothing to me

The windows are open now, clean for free dreaming
Arms open to the world and all for needing nothing

If I could run away, if I could be a star
Would it take much to save me?
To love you for who you are

I watch my life pass by
(Eyes) I can't keep closed
I've never been afraid to lose

You're damaged goods at best
And your breaking down on me
You're just like all the rest
Of us you need a meaning
That's nothing

If I could run away, if I could be a star
Would it take much to save me?
Save me

I never walk that line
I never saw the stars fall from the sky
In this night
In this painted light
I watch my dreams go by


© Copyright 2000 Jeffrey Barker - All Rights Reserved
AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
1 posted 2000-08-07 11:52 PM


very well written
Welcome to passions...


If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise?
Avanti Rao



rosepetals25
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
2 posted 2000-08-07 11:59 PM


Torn,

   I have to agree with AVANTI.. well written!   Welcome to Passions I look forward to reading more from you

                    rosepetals

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