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Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-08-07 09:19 PM


I will stand by your side
through the distance that parts us
I will be your support
through the ties that bind us

Let my love carry you
let me be your tide
to a shore of absolutness
forever by your side

If you start to feel lonely
and I know that you must
know my heart is lonely to
and in that you can trust

I love you my sweet
my soulmate you are
I am yours forever
and will never be far

The Winds of Wishes
carried you to me
"out of the dust"
for me to plainly see

I know you are here
as I am to
Let the winds keep blowig me
right back to you

to loves sweet embrace
of which we both know
Hold me tight
never let go

© Copyright 2000 Jenn E - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-08-07 09:25 PM


Beautiful sentiments of love...well said and the flow goes so well with the words...
T McCoy
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since 2000-07-24
Posts 186

2 posted 2000-08-07 09:34 PM


ditto what Mark said...
well said and i love the way it flows...

Tony  

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
3 posted 2000-08-07 11:05 PM


Thanks a bunch guys for your kind words. Ya hear that, Iv'e got the flow goin on...........LOL.  Thank you.  
Jenn E

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-08-07 11:21 PM


JennE*
This is beautiful...This flows from your
heart as I'm sure it was meant to...The
winds of fate and love blow us in so many
directions it's hard to catch our breaths
but when it's "the One"....maybe we aren't
meant to breathe......only feel.  
Magnificent Writing Jenn..I truly loved this
piece~

Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville
5 posted 2000-08-08 03:49 AM


this had left me spechless, as the writing is so well done and inspired....... one day I hope the two of you can.........
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2000-08-08 07:43 AM


JennE~

I enjoyed this -

'Let my love carry you
let me be your tide
to a shore of absolutness
forever by your side'

The tides keep ebbing and flowing -
always returning ...
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

7 posted 2000-08-08 09:49 AM


beautiful Jen,
sweet sincere expressions from your heart...
and the reasons for this poem
make me smile...
dreams dont fade in the winds of fate...
take care sweet poet
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
8 posted 2000-08-09 12:04 PM


Butterflies_dont_cry.......Thank You for your kind words. Yes, that is all I do is "feel", that is all we can all do.

Michael G........yes, it is indeed full of inspiration and I hope the same hope as you........

Marge.....Thank you so much for your reply. It means alot.  

Janet M.........Your words to me mean more then I can possibly say here. Thank you for being a friend.  

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
9 posted 2000-08-09 12:08 PM


Yes you do have the flow goin on!    This is absolutely beautiful Jenn.
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
10 posted 2000-08-09 12:17 PM


such sweet emotions here
Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
11 posted 2000-08-09 12:21 PM


the thing I love about poets, is when they sing from their heart it is truly beautiful.
Love this piece.

Parker

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
12 posted 2000-08-09 03:13 AM


Thank you Eloise and Paula for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it.  

Parker, my fellow Canadian, I am so pleased you liked it. Take Care.  

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