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The Wee Elf Boogie

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Mike
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0 posted 08-07-2000 08:05 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

The wee'est elf,
To all did say,
It's Friday night,
Come on, let's play.

We've toiled all week,
We've earned our keep,
Let's have some fun,
Before we sleep.

We'll boogie hard;
Shake our booties,
Forget about,
Our North Pole duties.

I'll tell you what,
We'll kareoke,
Wee elf asked all,
Okie Dokie?

Rudolph yelled,
Let's party down,
'Cause Santa Claus,
Has went to town.

The toy shop shook,
As out came Prancer,
To sing a song,
With stall-mate Dancer.

"I've Got You Babe."
To the letter,
Sonny and Cher,
Could do no better.

But then a hush,
Fell on shop floor,
As Santa Claus,
Walked through the door.

All elves and reindeer,
Held their breath,
With visions of,
Impending death.

Who's in charge,
Of this fiasco?
You've turned toy shop,
Into a disco!!!

Wee elf replied,
It was me sir,
Your wrath and ire,
I will incur.

Santa beckoned,
Come here wee elf,
And placed wee smirf,
Upon top shelf.

As wee elf quaked,
In wee elf fear,
Said Santa Claus,
All listen hear.

He then commenced,
Gyrating hips,
"Blue Suede Shoes,"
From forth his lips.

Elves and reindeer,
Dropped their jaws,
As they all stared,
At Santa Claus.

The party roared,
All through the night,
It lasted til,
The dawn's first light.

When to wee bed,
Wee elf then crept,
With wee elf smile,
Wee elf then slept.



[This message has been edited by Mike (edited 08-07-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 08-07-2000 08:10 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

Mike...This is absolutely charming. Congradulations to you for writing such a fine work. I'm glad that I had the chance to stop by.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 08-07-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is adorable!!!  and perfectly metered, might I add, lol...been studying y'know...
(hopefully it'll show someday...grin)


Thanks for the smiles...
Martie
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3 posted 08-07-2000 09:27 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hi Mike...Me thinks wee elf is soooo precious and I wanta disco too...with you!

I just love this!!!!

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-07-2000).]
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4 posted 08-07-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Hi there,...do you by chance write children's stories??? If not,....ummm,...you should. This is soOo cool. Aah Truly. Thanks for the smile your words have put on my face. Be well M. *Peace.
Marilyn
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5 posted 08-07-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Who knew that my friend Tim had such a wild side to him???....lmao. Thanks for the read and the smile.  



When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep;

How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face...

William Butler Yeats
Nan
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6 posted 08-07-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sshhhhhhhhhhh.......

The Wee Elf's asleep....






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 08-07-2000).]
Meadowmuse
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7 posted 08-07-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I know the wee folk will love this one, my friend. (and so do I!)    

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Mike
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8 posted 08-08-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank you all for the very gracious replies.
At work, wee elf is expected now by the secretaries, who ask... what is wee elf doing... smile.
Appreciate the comments.
EagleOne
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9 posted 08-08-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Marvelous!!!!

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown


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10 posted 08-08-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Mike,

      This is sooooooo cute! I'm very glad I stopped in!  You made me life

                rosepetals
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Mike,

      This is sooooooo cute! I'm very glad I stopped in!  You made me smile  

                rosepetals

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ethome
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12 posted 08-08-2000 04:02 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Cute, adorable, sweet, little elf boogie.... boogie on boogie on

Elf Boogie  (jailhouse rock melody)

Santa threw a party in the ol toy shop
The elf band was there and they began to rock
The band was jumpin they began to swing
You shoulda heard those pumped up elf cats sing.

Let's rock
everybody let's rock
everybody in the ol toy shop
was a dancin to the elf boogie rock.

It's up to someone else to do the next verse.....................
Sunnyone
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13 posted 08-08-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Mike....Hi!!
  
         I love Christmas in July!!!
     This was great, and filled me with
         wee elf spirit....
            Great writing here...
               fun and happy!!

      P.S. Nan does the neatest graphics!!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

wayoutwalt
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14 posted 08-08-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

mike your the keebler man!!! i love the saga!!
Paula Finn
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15 posted 08-08-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

how good of a girl do i have to be to get wee elf under my tree?
Lakewalker
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16 posted 08-08-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

This should certainly be among the Christmas classics   Now off to boogie...
serenity blaze
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17 posted 12-12-2005 05:13 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze



wee elf does karoake...sheesh

I've seen this yanno...



 
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