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Dreams Do Come True |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
There was a time... < !signature-->the uncertainty of life cut through me like a knife and troubled my mind. There was a day... I didn't know which way to turn, which bridges I should burn. I could not find my way. There was a time... when worry etched my brow. I didn't know what I know now. Peace, I could not find. Then there was you... You took the trouble from my soul. I was suddenly made whole. You knew exactly what to do. Then there was love... All the security that I need, from your strength, my soul did feed. You were sent from up above. Now there is peace... I close my eyes and I can soar high in the sky like never before. There are no more boundaries. Now there's a chance... My heart you some how saved. A magic wand you must have waved. You taught me how to dance. So now I must say... You're the answer to my prayer. True love is oh so rare in this world today. This is my Thank you... for all that you've done for me. You're living proof for all to see that dreams really do come true. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- [This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
With tears in my eyes I write this reply How this made me sigh Love's boundary surpasses the sky Tennessee Angel, This sums up the emotions of true love quite well....Thank you for this read tonight  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Angel, Yes indeed, true love can surpass many boundaries of hurt, loniness, etc. You have done very well with this poem that you have written. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have captured the lonliness of absense of love and the elation once it is obtained. Well written and so happy I got to read this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ This one line says it all .... for me .... 'You taught me how to dance' Yep ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Angel, This could only be penned from experience, this is gold. I loved how you took me through the stages of this love affair (made in heaven). This will make him beam! marcy |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
its wonderful when the right one comes along...and sometimes that takes a trip or two down loves highway |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
TA~ this is excellent! I could see it being a greeting card. Very nice. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lovely, romantic poem. I hope to find such a happy ending someday. Catalinamoon |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You've beautifully woven the path of love...dreams come true...if we have the patience to wait for them...makes them all the more beautiful doesn't it Awesome work TA~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tennessee Angel, never stop dancing my friend. . . never. . . Wonderful poem. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Reading this has just made me so emotional....so happy for you. Love can cut deep, yet it also heals that same cut. Love is an amazing thing as you have captured so beautifully in this poem. Jenn E |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Yay! Hope and love triumphs once again, as it always should! You illustrated how hope and love can overcome anything beautifully... nicely done! :0 |
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