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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-07 12:31 PM


through times that have past
this silent wave of chance
which has taken it's due course
of hope and prayers we lost.

it has a way of interaction
that belies the truth hidden here,
of passions we feel deep within
and love constrained of deals.

which by my own breath i spoke
and wept upon your breast,
my anger is not of you
just the chances that i lost.

so by my hand i find my solice
to put this too into words,
and follow my hearts content
as i dream of crystal tears.

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-08-07 12:42 PM


oh my sweet poet of heart...
you know..that I know...
this is so tender in its release of regret...
cry your beautiful poetic tears Michael..
they help heal your heart.
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Marina
Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
2 posted 2000-08-07 10:22 PM


You wear your heart on your sleeve, my friend.  And a wonderful one it is at that.

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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