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A Tear Kissed Dawn
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A Tear Kissed Dawn |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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A Tear Kissed Dawn D awn slips on in A s the moon disappears W akens with daylight N ight's lost in it's "mares". A tear kissed me, today surprised me this morn as a poem was rising, a new one now born. You kissed me with words as tender as you and then from inside a tear your thoughts drew. Just one in my eye the left one, I think my head had been tilted in daydreams, to sink. The desires and needs all the wanting to feel words "tear kissed" me, yours for I know they meant real. When the kiss of the moment reaches lips waiting full I can feel your draw near me Each tear kiss you pull. In the moonlight I'm passioned but when dark's been consumed I wait for the dawning To erase all that's gloomed M 8*7*2k * a little one for you poutprincess *S |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MMoonchild~ this is great!  -SEA |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Maureen, i dont think i can even begin to tell you how you have touched me. youve brought something very special into my heart and i desperately needed it. thank you for being more than a poet...thank you for being a sacred soul....this wont be forgotten. ~with tears, and smiles Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sea..thank you I am glad you liked it ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
hahah..im going to be selfish..im bringing this one back to the top!  whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
well now ... a moonbeam cascading on a princess very lovely |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ 'Night's lost in it's "mares".' Sweet play on words there, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When the kiss of the moment reaches lips waiting full I can feel your draw near me Each tear kiss you pull. In the moonlight I'm passioned but when dark's been consumed I wait for the dawning To erase all that's gloomed This is lovely in every sense of the word. Enjoyed it much. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well you little pouter you....made my day to start off smiling ~~softly thanking you ..will catch you all later to respond but I am off for a little "real" today to make my life a bit brighter {{hugs}} Princess of Dawn Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rex Allen McCoy thanks for the approval..sometimes one wants to use another's inspiration or spirit in a poem and the pouting princess proved to be she was the opposite... a Dawning Princess ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge, do you ever wonder where these thoughts come from sometimes..scares me when I write like this ~~soft smiles and hugs Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Mark I love writing "lovely" ~~soft smiles M |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Now if you had made the entire thing acrostic I think I would have just given up and began chanting.... we're not worthy. You are a very talented lady. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
this is absoulutly breathtaking! thanks for this one, I loved it...i can't find the words to describe the beauty of this. would love to read more.... salooma |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Ok jamie..now ya done it..I was told about a double acrostic where the first letters and the end letters each spell one half of the title....now I am going to work on that just for you...if I can only come up with a good title now.....hmm..well you will see ..then I will challenge you to do one... ~~soft hugs...you are making this lots of fun for me...my shadow M [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very beautiful. I enjoyed this very much. Jenn E |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Salooma thank you very much for all your kind words Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jenn E thank you for your nice responses they are appreciated Maureen |
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