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Darling Be Mine...Yes....Until....the End of Time (Hit it boys)
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Darling Be Mine...Yes....Until....the End of Time (Hit it boys) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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you might need the tune that was playin in my head...sorta Bing Crosby and Andy Kaufman When nothing but a moonbeam Is playing in your eyes It’s a feature presentation When there is a chance To hold you in my arms love I take it without hesitation With you the poet in me wakes dear And I become William Shakespeare To be or not to be It’s all up to youuuuu I was given three wishes by a genie I wished: you, mittens, and a beanie Who do you keep warm and out of harm? Me! So I gave the rest to the Salvation Army! You are my sweet surrender I’ll play a tune on my Fender I play all my music just for you Do de do de do de dooooooooo I like being called your sweet heart Although skittles are my fave One thing I ask of you love Don’t go piddle on my grave There’s long time before I’m dead yet I sometimes still make My bed wet Those were two quick And funny hehe Potty jokes see? When I gaze the Pools of your eyes Make me hafta pee Love, I was sliding Down a rainbow And fell into a pot The gold dust flew All around me And you are what I got [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I was sliding Down a rainbow And fell into a pot .... WAY TOO COOL, Walt.... WAY TOO COOL regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Walt I'm a songwriter from way back when and I love it when people write like this. These are wonderful varying types of lyrics and I enjoyed reading them.....lyric might be a little long to fit into a three minute song (geez even that rhymes) but they are great lyrics all the same. The first three verses are excellent song lyrics and could go Bing Crosby easy The others become quite Kaufman like right down to the pee and the piddle.... Keep up the good work my man.....is that a Strat or a Telecaster you're talking about or a fender acoustic?? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~  Don't worry ... be happy !   Laughing much too much this early morning hour ! Thank you for the delighticism ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Walt, This is Wonderful hehehe I can see you singing this yuh I can Great Job! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
. you get a dot a dot means GREAT HILARITY...or can't breathe...(if you're Martie..lol) you may have several dots: . . . . lollol you are a killer Walteeeeee K |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great.....just love the way you describe your "love" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Walt wows me again!!! This is perfect!!! Only you can write W.O.W. poetry. Love yuh much! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was terific!!! Put a smile on my face and a spring in my stepp! ladeda ladeda.......WOW, this was refreshing read! Jenn E |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 LOL Good one Walt ... much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you guys are too nice do de do de do de do |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Poets in the night.... exchanging lances... shoobeey--dooobey---doooo- pa-da-dada-da--- If the crooner could sing with Bowie why not Andy???... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
With a fol-rick-a-diddle-pol-de-ayyyyyyy...Walt, I just love your absurdist style! Alicat  |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Walt, I love it when you light the fantastic trip! You're our Walty and we'll laugh if we want to....laugh if we want to...laugh if we want to |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You are so cute, Walt! Corinne |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx all do de do de doooooooo doody |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walt~ this is fun! I loved the flow.....(get it? my little potty joke back to ya) -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Sea Got Pee? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Only you Walt can take something romantic and crack someone up in the middle of it! I love the beginning lines, and the end....some fantastic wording! And of course the middle LMBO! All of it Walt, all of it!  I had so much fun I'm just rollin! <*\\\>< The will of God will never lead you, where the grace of God cannot keep you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHHHHHH I GOTTA PEE...laughing so hard...play it again sam never say never |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I AIM TO PLEASE hahahahahah pee jokes rule!! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your talent amazes, the rhyming is extraordinary, and the poem simply flows, especially at the end. Thanks for the fun Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh..... thought this could do with a trip to the pot...oh I mean top yeah (yuh) K |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Walt ~ hmmmm.....I kinda had you figgered for the Mel Torme' type. This was grand, and I'm sure your love felt, uh, honored by it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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