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Mystikal_Sacrament
New Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 2
K.Falls,OR

0 posted 2000-08-07 01:18 AM

Golden spears of the sun rise before my eyes,
The clinging dew on the grass is chased away,
And here i sit with one wish- where in my heart it lies,
To be rich,to be famous,or beauty unceasingly to stay,
It's my choice,and my choice alone,
Averting my eyes to the sun,and in my softest tone,
I make my wish and hold it dear,
The pounding of my very heart; all i can hear.

And,so,each day i wait for my one wish to come true,
Which day the magick will work, i have no clue,
Sunrise after sunrise i expectantly wait,
My desire and fear both equally great,
I wait for you to come-with a curve to your lips,
I listen for your melodic voice-my heart,it flips,
I look for your midnight blue eyes with love cast anew,
But hence the sixth day rolls by,i suddenly knew.

My foolishly craved wish was used and wasted,
I wished for you to love me,but love cannot be forced,
your lips-for me-will never be tasted,
Nor your sweet voice carry that endearing tone,
And never will your eyes-with love-be shown,
It was love i wished for and in you i wanted it,
But all that lies where our love should be is a bottom-less pit,
And within it a lie floating upon a dream.

I drop your red rose to the ground,
With it a single tear escapes and falls without a sound,
I close my eyes and whisper to you,
With all my dreams,and hopes, doomed never to come true,
I whisper to you with a shattered heart,
I have wasted my one wish on you-foolish from the start,
But though i knew it so,my hopeful feelings hid it,
You will never love me-even if i wish it.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-08-07 01:22 AM

Love your name, love this poem, welcome to Passions!

IrishRose
New Member

since 2000-07-31

Posts 1
K.Falls, OR

2 posted 2000-08-07 01:24 AM

I really enjoyed reading this poem - because in a sense it is so true! Very lovely,and well-written.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2000-08-07 01:28 AM

Hey there I have to tell you this is as fine an entry poem as I have seen......I echo Serenity's welcome to Passions...I'll be looking for more from you.

David D
Junior Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 19

4 posted 2000-08-07 01:49 AM

I just posted my first poem last night. I really enjoyed your first post. Keep it up.

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