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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-08-06 10:07 PM


I could walk  thousand miles
to fear my souls crush.
Of words I heard and those inspired
that could control this rush.

In twilight of my minds repose
a single thought lay clear.
Of watching you breathe in slow
your life I held so dear.

My memories of hearts in passion
that cleanse me of my fears.
To know my heart still beats
is what I bring from you.

And yes those kisses that you gave
in nights of pleanty held.
The mornings dance of touch
where love became our spell.

So I rest my mind and continue on
as my heart is full of you.
And dream of days forth coming love
when our hearts will know its true.

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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-08-06 10:13 PM


Michael, this was so tender and romantic. Vey nice!
catalinamoon

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-08-06 10:19 PM


I could walk  thousand miles
to fear my souls crush.
Of words I heard and those inspired
that could control this rush.

In twilight of my minds repose
a single thought lay clear.
Of watching you breathe in slow
your life I held so dear.
==========================
To know my heart still beats
is what I bring from you.

And yes those kisses that you gave
in nights of pleanty held.
The mornings dance of touch
where love became our spell.

So I rest my mind and continue on
as my heart is full of you.
And dream of days forth coming love
when our hearts will know its true.
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oh I do so love this one...
such sweet depth of emotions...
written with a gentle grace about it
(your trade mark me thinks)  
later-fav-poet-of mine-gator
me

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