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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-08-06 07:45 PM



Eyes



I see you
Your beautiful lovely eyes
The window to your soul
Inside them I see love
And in that, I see my future
I see laughter we share
I see the tears of sorrow
That I want to take away
I see understanding
That only you can give
I see a kindness and warmth
Two reasons I love you even more
I see the honesty and trust
That I treasure so much
I see the safety and comfort
I have been endlessly searching for
And I see the thing I adore most
I see you.



© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-08-06 07:51 PM


All I see a great poem filled with love

"And I see the thing I adore most
I see you."

How romantic!

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2 posted 2000-08-06 08:40 PM


Lakewalker - Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it  
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3 posted 2000-08-06 08:40 PM


Lakewalker - Aww thank you! I'm glad you liked it  
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4 posted 2000-08-06 10:25 PM


Ok.. I know it is shameful.. but I like this poem.. so I am giving it a bump.. just once..hehe.
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