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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2000-08-06 07:37 PM

“TREASURED MOMENTS”

I know of this place in the mountains,
That’s way up high in the sky.
It overlooks the green valley,
Where we can watch the eagles fly.

Together we could see the sunrise,
Coming up in the east far away.
Holding hands together, as we stand there,
Touching, in the early morning of the day.

Your lips are moist like the morning dew,
Ruby red and soft, just like a rose.
I can still see you standing there,
Just like an eloquent picture pose.

I held you so tight, as we embraced,
And we became lovers, like Romeo and Juliet.
I still remember that first time we kissed,
Your soft lips I won’t ever forget.

A tear suddenly welled up inside me,
And came down my face so wet.
Because I found that I was only dreaming,
When I opened my eyes with regret.

Now that my eyes are open,
I know that you are so far away.
If I were to only see you,
It would be a very special day.

This would be a romance made in heaven,
And it’s for only you and I.
Let’s take our special moments,
And pray we would never say goodbye.

One year I could promise you happiness,
Will you consider five, or maybe more?
Let me love you totally,
That’s all I would ever ask you for.

Bill Charles

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2000-08-06 07:41 PM

Bill,

~sighs~ How could anyone say no to such a romantic notion? Once again.. simply beautiful work

rosepetals

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2000-08-06 07:42 PM

That sounds great to me!. I love the title, Treasured Moments.
I'm sure she won't turn this down
Very sweet and loving poem
Liz

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-08-06 07:47 PM

Bill...
       I can't even express how beautiful
    your words are....they are so loving
    and gentle, but given from a heart that
    is strong and true.

          Romance isn't dead....
            it gave it's soul to you!!!!

I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2000-08-06 07:51 PM

Hi rosepetals25,
Thanks for stopping by my place. I always welcome you and any comments you may write. But thank you so much for all those kind ones.

Hello Elizabeth,
Once again you have been kind with your comments, and I thank you very much. Thanks for coming by.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2000-08-06 08:08 PM

Shucks Sunny...
I'm not only blushin', as usual, but fussin' too, as your so gracious words touch me once again.

Yes, you are so right, my soul does belong to romance, the wonderment that it is.

ddgoose
Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2000-08-06 09:20 PM

Bill

Very romantic poem with tons of feelings everywhere. I just love the following words:

One year I could promise you happiness,
Will you consider five, or maybe more?
Let me love you totally,
That’s all I would ever ask you for.

Sounds like to have a heart just bursting with love.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2000-08-07 07:54 AM

Oh "dd", you are more than kind with your generous comments. And yes, it is bursting. Let's do another poem together soon.

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