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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-08-06 07:26 PM


I Wish You a Moonbeam

I wish you a moon beam, I wish you a star
May happiness be there wherever you are
I wish you a life time of joy and of love
And all of the things you’ve been dreaming of

I wish you success and a brilliant career
I wish you great accolades year after year
May you always find purpose in that which you do
And may a sense of fulfillment be waiting for you

I wish you contentment each day of the year
And a handful of loved ones holding you near
May you discover life’s purpose reflect in their eyes
May you sing them to sleep with sweet soft lullabies

May each day start with sunshine and end peacefully
May you stop every now and then, remembering  me

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-08-06 07:29 PM


Oh Liz ... OK, so how many favorites do I have of yours already ... my baskets getting full!  Keep them coming, you know I love them so. This was just beautiful, something that you could present to a special someone on so many occassions ... beautiful sentiments Liz!  

Best wishes me twin,
/Kit

Lakewalker
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2 posted 2000-08-06 07:38 PM


I find your poetry wonderful, and this one's another on the list
Kellsue
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3 posted 2000-08-06 07:41 PM


Beautiful as always Liz!!

~Kelly


You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving
There is no danger of developing eye-strain from looking on the bright side of things

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2000-08-06 07:45 PM


Kit, Yes it's kind of a generic poem, now that you meantion it. Could be for a lot of different people. But you know what I meant!
Thanks, my twin

Lakewalker, Thank you for your kind comment

Kelly, Thank you

Liz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 08-06-2000).]

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2000-08-06 07:49 PM


Elizabeth,
  
    What a warm, loving and caring poem!  I love it as always  

                   rosepetals

Martie
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6 posted 2000-08-06 07:52 PM


This would be a great poem to submit to the main site...alot of people would find it meaningful and want to send it to someone special....and that's what I think!  Hugs!
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-08-07 12:12 PM


ditto what Martie said...
wonderful heartfilled wishes of lifes
sweetest offerings...
from our sweetest poet
see how well that worked out *smile*
love ya Lizzie-gator
jm

Salooma
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8 posted 2000-08-07 12:15 PM


great poem...catchy title by the way. very sweet and truely precious.

salooma

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-08-07 02:03 AM


Elizabeth~
I'll see that moonbeam -
and raise you a star !

Love you~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Jenn E
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10 posted 2000-08-07 02:40 AM


I love your poems, impossible to pick a fav...this was so tender and true, I really enjoyed it.  
Jenn E

ethome
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11 posted 2000-08-07 02:48 AM


I have to stop by every now and then because I remember you and the wonderful words you can put together in verse.....always such a beautiful touch of humanity in your work Elizabeth, this is no exception...I wish you a moonbeam that will keep carrying these wonderful poetic ideas to you. Then I wish you my desire to read the results.
Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2000-08-07 04:55 AM


Ah! beautiful indeed!

regards,
sudhir

jamesjiao
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13 posted 2000-08-09 07:43 PM


This poem gives me so much courage, Liz.. I will remember it whenever I feel frustrated

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



Majestic
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houston, tx.
14 posted 2000-08-09 10:23 PM


such beautiful sentiments...How could we possibly forget you..hehe

"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



kitkat
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15 posted 2000-08-09 11:05 PM


I agree with everyone above. This is great
Dawn Eclipse
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16 posted 2000-08-09 11:08 PM


That was a beautiful poem... it created a beautiful picture in my mind.  One of the best i've read in a while.     

"The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper."
Eden Phillpotts
*Cassandra Roseen*

Balladeer
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17 posted 2000-08-09 11:18 PM


Thank you, dear Liz....and I wish the same for you  
ma miller
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18 posted 2000-08-10 08:13 AM


only you ES could come up with a wish so beautifully penned ... an easy read ... loved it ...

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.



Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
19 posted 2000-08-10 08:19 AM


Thank you all for your beautiful replies to this poem. You warm my heart
Liz

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2000-08-10 02:23 PM


Liz I want that life of joy and love that you speak of...I receive it...my hope, my desire, my dream...precious thoughs...James
LoveBug
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21 posted 2000-08-10 02:49 PM


Oh Liz... what a piece! (as usual!) All I can do is wish that you recieve all the great things you have written about.  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

BloomingRose
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22 posted 2000-08-10 03:13 PM


Beautiful! It really speaks from the heart.

Deb
Blooming Rose

Mike
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23 posted 2000-08-10 03:50 PM


beautiful poetry.  wonderfully written.
MMoonchild
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24 posted 2000-08-10 09:37 PM


Liz...loved it
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Denise
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25 posted 2000-08-10 11:09 PM


Very beautiful wishes and poem, of course!  

Denise

lucky
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26 posted 2000-08-11 02:03 AM


Liz,

Your one of my most favorite moonbeams... I haven't had much time to write or post as we're readying two of our houses for selling. Just got back from our 4th. camping out this year with the kids. Send you an "e" update. We have everything you've ever posted here at Passions and also a few other sites where you've posted, all on CD Rom. I have only one of you and your husband's pics. Do you think I could get a bio..? much much love and prayers from us both.

The "lucky keeper" Dale


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
27 posted 2000-08-11 05:18 AM


James,
I hope your life will be fullfilled with all you wish for

Love Bug, I have them all

Deb,
Thank you so much

Mike, Thanks, dear friend for your nice comments

Mareen, Keep smiling

Denise, Thank you, dear

Lucky, You have my poems on CD?. I don't even have them that organised. Thank you for your kind response
Liz

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