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You bring out the Gypsy in my Soul
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You bring out the Gypsy in my Soul |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Come.....dance with me..... 'neath the full moon so high.. Under stars that are sprinkled in a black-velvet sky.. I know you're not mine, but if you drink my wine, You'll forget--All but me--For all time.. Come.....sit by me......... near the fire tonight.. Look deep in my eyes where the fire burns bright.. And if you can see, Passion burning in me, I am yours--You are mine--We are free.. Come.....take my kiss...... feel the heat of desire.. Love will cast her sweet spell by the light of our fire.. From flesh we will rise, High above earthly ties, Joined as one--Love begun--Never dies.. Come.....evermore.......... nevermore be afraid.. Of the heart..of the need..of the love that we made.. A gypsy will do what she must to have you.. But the spell--Only works--If you want it to! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
sunny--what a lovely spell you cast with your words...beautifully done! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I must agree with Martie, Sunny...this is enchantment. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, SunnyGirl~ The Gypsy in me LOVES it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ahhh Sunny... What you write and what you do with these words. I sit in wonderment of your talent, and romance that I see in your heart. Goodness, goodness me! Just stunning. If I keep printing these out, I will surely run out of paper. Come.....dance with me..... 'neath the full moon so high.. Come.....sit by me......... near the fire tonight..I am yours Come.....take my kiss...... feel the heat of desire.. Come.....evermore.......... nevermore be afraid.. But the spell--Only works--If you want it to! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Martie.... Thank you very much.....I would love to be a wizard, but as I was put here as a mortal, I shall find another kind of magic, and I'm glad you like it!! I do so love to read everything you post!! Claire....If these verses can enchant one who writes such as you, I am quite honored by your reply!!! Thank you!!!!! Marge....I knew this would bring out the 'gypsy' in your soul!! I can tell tell you are a fellow gypsy by the music in your words....makes my spirit dance!! Thank you, also!! Bill....I take your praise as the highest compliment a romantic like myself could receive!!! You write like none other, and if you run across a wholesaler on printer paper, let me know, as I'm a follower of yours, also!!!!! Thank you, m my friend...... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Oh Sunny What an exciting enchanting tale you weave. Come.....evermore.......... nevermore be afraid.. Of the heart..of the need..of the love that we made.. A gypsy will do what she must to have you.. But the spell--Only works--If you want it to! I just love it! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sunny1..." A gypsy will do what she must to have you.. But the spell--Only works--If you want it to" What a tale you weave as you call out the spirit is all of us....wonderful! jwesley |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sunny, what a captivating piece you have penned here.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this is outstanding, I adore this. I did a little poem about a love spell once, this is such a fantastic way of showing the power of love, and how much we want to hold onto someone. And damned if it might not work, too. I am off to get some candles, as I have no fire close by. catalinamoon |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
ddgoose.... I'm really glad you liked this!! I have gypsy blood and it popped out of my pen..... Thank you!! jwesley.... Aah, but we are all spirits dancing in the flesh, or so Santana says!! Thank you!! Eloise.... So glad that you came by for a read, and I thank you so much!! catalinamoon.... Who is to say that a love spell won't work?? I have seen stranger things happen, and I was born on Halloween, so let me help you with the candles!!! (and I thank you!!) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The way you structure this poem, especially the first lines of the stanzas, made the enchantment. Well Done, Gloom |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Professor Gloom... Thank you for seeing the form in this poem! That, to me, is just as important as the words. I do appreciate your input!!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear the guitars and castanets in the background as the dance begins. . . Excellent poem my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
What a sweet, sensual spell this is. Very lovely. Jenn E |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Oooh my...! What a wonderful poem...! Made me want to swing my hips and swish ever so! Nice job! [This message has been edited by Artistic (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven.... I can also see you dance 'neath the light of the full moon!!! Knight of romance that you are, I know that you would be a pleasure to behold! (Thank you, also) Jenn E.... I am glad you enjoyed this....I knew there were other gypsies out there..... Thank you for reading!! Artistic... Yes, swish away....that is what the dance is all about!! Thank you for stopping by and Welcome to the family!! I have but one goal in life......It is: Not to have just one goal in Life!! ~ ~ ~ Sunny ~ ~ ~ |
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