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Dream Me Your Lullaby
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Dream Me Your Lullaby |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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She dances to voices of midnight wish A desire inside her fans flame Reaches your heart to touch with your mind As her whispers are calling your name "Can you hear", she cries in shadows of moon Awaiting an answer through breeze "Sing me your song of your visions of dreams Release my desires with ease Dream me your lullaby soft and sweet Arouse me in whispers of sin Sip on the memories of yesterday Hide child, bring out woman within" Fly her to heights never reached before Pools of blue limitless skies Stretching her arms and enveloping all Embracing and touching, she ~sighs "Fill me, this void", she whispers through air Hoping her words drift towards you "Satisfy hunger and thirst for this love And feast upon us, passions, two." M*99 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wow! Maureen...What a lullaby...so sultry, yet soft...beautifully written words...loved it! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ A lovely lullabye. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Martie I was a poet of the month last year and had to do some audio poems and this was one I did...it's on my website too...I learned so much by having to have a webpage...makes the poems so real. ~~soft smiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Marge.. ~~soft smiles M |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautifully sweet and tender lullibye Maureen ... just lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
well if I can't have one sung to me then I will dream one.. ~~soft smiles Maureen *thanks Kit *wink |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh i agree....a very beautiful lullaby..this one will be in my head and heart for awhile! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Dawn...thank you...such a pretty name for a poutprincess....people wake to your morning surprises every day...hmm a new poem on the rise ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Any that could not hear such beautiful words and thoughts as these, is surely deaf! lovely.. thanks S. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Steve for your kind words ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Your poems never disappoint. Beautiful as is always the case. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Sultry, soft, and completely gorgeous...I am in awe. Wonderful work! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
One can certainly drift away in this very nicely written |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Jamie ...thank you for your kind words..they are greatly appreciated ~~soft hugs Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Princess of Dawn..you can hear me read this if you like ... let it load ... it can freeze up your computer...let it load and then cliclk on the arrow http://www.geocities.com/mmoonchild1/audiodreamme.html or this is the site where I was poet of the month...it has to play through once usually then click on the start (very irritating how it does that for some and not for others...*s have fun http://www.fortunecity.com/victorian/kapoor/956/maureen/maureen6.html {{hugs}} Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Alwye, thank you for your sweet comments ~~soft smiles Maureen darn that 26 was an ugly faced icon I am sorry I must have hit the wrong numbers  had to edit whenI saw that[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-09-2000).] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Sighs....Awwww, What a beautiful sweet lullaby to read before I drift off to be with the one I love. Very nice indeed. Jenn E |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rex Allen McCoy were you driftin lately...hmmmmmm that's a dreamy thought isn't it ~~smiling Maureen |
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Eddie de Jong Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27 |
The passion and desire are expressed equisitely. E |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I enjoyed every word. This was so beautifully romantic. Michael |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Jenn E so sweet of you to say so ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
awwww Eddie you "blush me" ~~softly smiling a thank you Maureen |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
another beautiful post, i love the way you make them so breezy and calm and so interesting. loved it....keep em comin' Salooma |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Auguste thank you Michael...I appreciate your reading and stopping to comment ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Salooma what a sweet thing to say thank you ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, Everytime I come by, I read the excellance of a master. I sit in wonderment of your writings and your talent. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
not true ...thanks except for the niceness of your words always.. ~~smiles Maureen |
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