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Your Eyes - Your Lips - Your Fingertips |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Your Eyes - Your Lips - Your Fingertips ~*Marge Tindal*~ Are you someone I used to know ? You look so familiar to me The corners of your smile bear a slight resemblance I see The green of your eyes shines brightly like those I once adored You look so familiar to me Are you sure we haven't met before ? Your arms are so inviting I feel they've held me tightly You feel so familiar to me A dream that returns to me nightly Your eyes, your lips, your fingertips all have a charm of their own I feel that they belong to someone that I've known Inviting me to again explore a place I think I've been Traipsing the familiar trail you've drawn I find the heart of you, my friend ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Been there before Marge? it mystically seems like that is so... many past thoughts coming back to haunt your memories. Wonderful comparisons you are making here to describe the similarities.......very well done Marge I like the character innuendos through the reflections on the past. Great work Marge!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Inviting me to again explore a place I think I've been Traipsing the familiar trail you've drawn I find the heart of you, my friend ....... Marge, this is ... ...so lovely... regards, sudhir |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge, I like this poem as I always like all your poems. rosepetals25 aka Tara  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge, Every poem I read of yours is "Excellence"! You are so very good at placing your thoughts on paper. I'm coming by again, once again, and again, as long as you keep posting. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge- I found this to be both beautiful and mysterious.....the memories of days of a child and young adult kept popping in and from where you get your inspiration I half expected to see in the end that you were gazing into a mirror...LOL That is meant only as a compliment and not of self adornment though you have many reasons to feel that way. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, what a wonderful feeling of deja-vue placed to words ... such an exquisite feeling you've described Marge! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Perfectly expressed Marge! I have often wondered the same thing, and you have penned it wonderfully with flair and magic Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Oh, babe ... been there and back ! And then this little muse came back and delivered an extension to this one. Now I've got to figure out what to do with it. Thank you. Sudhir~ I thank you from the heart of this friend. RosePetals~ So glad you let me know. Thank you. Bill~ I do appreciate it. I don't really have a choice or a say in it. They just keep coming and I write. MarkB~ Oh, my goodness - The mystery is that it remains so. No reflections here ... I don't think. But what do I know ? LOL ! Kit~ Maybe deja `vu is what it is. Thanks for the insight. Melissa~ Thanks, honey ! Keeps us guessing, huh ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, The thought of someone dear to me comes at the sight of a beautiful flower or the sweet melody of the song bird, or the comfort of a cool summers breeze, the love for someone like you my friend a feeling that comes over and over again, for I may never have seen your smilling face or talked on the phone but the words that your heart produces has left there mark on me, thank you for another wonderful poem my friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! This has a real dreamy quality to it! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Are you sure you don't have the "hard hat syndrome"? Well, that's irrelevant. This is one beautiful poem, Marge, and you make it look so easy. Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ And likewise, my friend. But we're gonna fix one of those things right now. Check your e-mail ! Denise~ Thanks, my friend .... I'd have to agree with you on that ! It has that feel to me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lizzie~ LOL @ 'hard hat syndrome' .... I missed you in there ... must have been distracted by those tight-fitting jeans and t-shirts ! I LOVE it cause they post the speed limit real slow .... lots of looking time ! You and Christina wanna go cruising ? Droooooooooooling ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Deja Vu, could you be the dream that I once knew, is it you? Corinne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Was waiting for that question to pop up ! Guess you liked the movie too ! Thanks for replying. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
You amaze me in all that you write. You have such a way of expressing emotions I am sure we have all felt, just can't express. This was a beautifully expressive poem. Another poem enjoyed. Thank You. Jenn E |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
One word...Beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennE~ Thank you for the compliment. I certainly enjoy writing for others to enjoy. Hoot~ Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I believe you probably have more fun writing than most. It shows in all your poems. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Me ?  Fun ? Guilty as charged !  Thank you - that's a heck of a compliment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ My dear, this is stunning.... I just love it... how very lovely! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
I enjoyed reading this several times..as it kept bringing back old memories for me to savor...thanks for the excellent read..< !signature--> "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ [This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 08-08-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ It is sooooooo good to see your name in my mailbox ! Glad ... really glad you enjoyed it. *Hugs* and thanks. Majestic~ Ahhhhhh ! Just knowing you enjoyed it enough to read it a couple of times puts a smile on this lady's face. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I luv this one Marge and the closing verse is sweet =) Coco =) |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Oooohmigod Marge! That poem was fantastic!! It reminded me so vividly of something I think I might've gone through before...? Pure Deja Vu to me!! *shivers* Loved it!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ Thank you, my sweet friend. Artistic/Lizzie~ Thank you for letting me know it 'shivered' you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Marge; Everyone has said it all, but I'll say it anyway...This is so incredibly romantic and filled with passion and versed perfectly, as usual. You are so gifted, I love your poetry! Love, ellie P.S. thank you for all your lovely responses to my poems! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Marge, this soooooo well done! Thanks so much for sharing. Take care, Juls |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge...sorry it took me so long to reply to this...actually I thought I had, because I did read it, but when I went back just now...I wasn't there....go figure...anyway I do love the thought of this...always so intriguing...and you have said it so well. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge MAGIC! I loved this one. The feeling of it is awesome. I really could relate to this as I am sure many others could as well. Your gift continues to shine through time and time again. I sit in awe. Love ya, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Oh Marge this speaks so well of familiarities of friendship, very beautifully done. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Thank you for the friendship that makes this such a wonderful place to share thoughts. Juliet~ So happy to share with you. Thanks for liking it. Martie~ Oh, sure ! ! Out watching the sunset, are you ? LOL !  Amy~ Awwwwwweeeeee! Go on with ya' ! I'm always happy to see your reply. Gemini~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Bump...Bump...Bump...I love this one Marge!!!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I think I've been there before!! This was great my friend. Isn't it amazing how we meet people that we swear we know from somewhere? You just never know. Wonderful writing my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I've definitely added MT of my list of poets I will seek out in my reading. This is wonderful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseAngel~ Thank ya', doll ! LoneWolf~ Yep ! Amazes me too ! WilfredYeats~ Thank you so much for the honor. I hope I meet your expecations. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Marge!! You have described the feeling so perfectly! I love it!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lil'Lizzie~ Thank you for the enthusiasm of your sweet reply. I miss you !  Hope you get a chance to post something from your wonderful holiday ! Love ya', my friend. *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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