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A small group of Tankas....
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A small group of Tankas.... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Blessed You make my heart sing I feel as though I could fly Joy I feel inside Ever since I’ve known your love Life has been so very blessed * * Eternity I give you my love With a complete open heart Mind, body and soul I will love you forever Merged souls for eternity * * Passion Your warm gentle touch Soft caress of your body The sound of your breath Your love filled passionate eyes Takes me to another world * * My Strength Your love is my strength Giving me the grace I need To fight my way through This new long and lonely day Waiting for the love you do [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosepetals, You can read this poem of yours to me any time you wish, over and over, day and night. I'm very touched. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosepetals, You can read this poem of yours to me any time you wish, over and over, day and night. I'm very touched. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill - Awwww Bill.. your nice words mean so much. Thank you  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ These are beautiful, perfectly executed and presented so lovely. Quite a little Tanka treasure trove. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge - Thank you I think I am addicted to the Tanka form! lol I have many more that I will eventually post |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
rose.. these are outstanding!!!! and your colorful presentation made the read extra enjoyable... very creative and well done adding these to my library take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals.... These are beautiful and tender...... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very soft and tender words from the heart. Very enjoyable read. Jenn E |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
Wow....I could not read without thoughts of my friend. Loved it. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Janet - Thank you much I'm glad you liked it Sunny - Thanks  Jenn - I'm glad you liked them so much. David - I'm glad they reminded of your friend Thanks for stopping by. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
These are so lovely and they each and every one are treasures indeed. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Thank you so much. I'm glad you likd them. |
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