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She Comes to Me

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Auguste
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She Comes to Me

by

Auguste

Late at night as the crickets chirp,
while the world sleeps and the birds have
quieted their wings, she comes to me

This sweet vision. Oh how I await her presence, her fragrance, the soft breathing against my lips just before they meet my own

And how I hunger for her touch, that soft and cool skin against mine as she whispers of things that I must keep in secret

As we embrace and I deeply breathe her in I suddenly awake like so many nights before to find she isn't there. It was but another dream

And now awake, like an echo of something just said, I can still sense her presence and take in her scent for just a few seconds before it melts away





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ethome
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That's a beautiful dream Auguste and you did a wonderful job writing...very very good work!!
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OHHH Auguste what a sensual dream

never say never
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Michael, isn't it uncanny how dreams can be so real? This piece has an almost ethereal quality...lovely expression, my friend.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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Auguste...
          Another beautiful and mystical
       picture you have painted in my mind!!
       What a painting that would make...
       one lover reaching for the other, only
       to find them fading into a mist!!

              See what you do to me??
                 (Great writing!!!)


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

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Auguste~
Oh, this is just lovely.
Melodiously melting in the mist.

I like what you do with a dream.
~*Marge*~


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