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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Moonchild Moonchild, loveliest child of the moon Please shine all you wonders for us to consume They’re deep down inside you, just hidden away Waiting to sparkle when gloom fades away Your heart is just waiting for life to appear Your mind is just waiting to come out of fear Your soul overflows with great wonders to give And you wait the right moment to openly live Moonchild, loveliest poet in the sky Write me a tender and sweet lullaby Think of the most cherished thing that you know And then let the ink and the sweet passions flow From out of your pen comes the light of your soul From out of your heart all the sorrows unfold But sooner than later the ink will change tune And out will pour love from the child of the moon For life comes in stages like phases of moon Eclipses are just passing shadows of gloom Then your face will light up from the warmth off the sun And you will cast moonbeams upon everyone Love Liz |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Now there's a friendship poem of the greatest magnitude Beautifully written Elizabeth ... and this group could sure use some of those precious moonbeams from Maureen to add to this beauty |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I must agree with Rex...this is beautiful, Liz, and I am sure Maureen will love it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh yes this is great.....and what a lovely poet person you extended the pen of friendship to. She is so gifted with beautiful moods of expression and like you say her time in the sun will come....such a fitting expression of love Elizabeth and such a tribute to yourself for so doing.... well done well done!!!!! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Looks as though both of you "cast moonbeams upon everyone". this is a precious sentiment...you are both lucky to have friends like each other! I know a place where I can go when Im low,into your arms I can go. ~The Lemonheads |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a beautiful friendship poem! She'll love it.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
This is beautiful Liz, a friend indeed. I did indeed like this one. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So beautiful Liz...from such a sweet heart to such a sweetheart. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Passionate Friends I have been overwhelmed by the responses of "friends" Have been answering, teasing, with words that I've penned. My clocks not in tune now, my hours turned 'round So I went to sleep early and this morning I found Many more emails alerting me to Many more poets warm words to review. I did my best wanting, to repond just a bit To the expressions of others, to enjoy what was writ. Then I came across one, couldn't be meant for me. Must have another Moonchild, that's it, had to be. But the curiosity caught and I had to check in.. Oh My! What I found...darn..made tears flow again. I can do that so easily, when touched by you "all" Whether happy or sad..they are partial to me and fall. But I'm so ..I don't know..at a loss to express How you've made me so welcomed, and how very impressed I have become with the warmth, the closeness, the feel Of a group of fine poets, that charm reel to real. Hearts on their sleeves, their movies of words I feel them, am touched by...every emotion incurred. Liz, I must thank you, I am not even sure What has brought this about, but the feelings are pure Of the happy you've made me and the warm felt inside I am trying to share all my feelings that I hide. And to all of you here, who've responded in thread I am greatful to all, and am blushing faced red. ~~hugs~~ to you everyone...especially Liz Maureen Moonchild |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Liz-such a dear friend you are to reach out and touch the heart of your fellow poet...I know she will treasure this and you forever. Nicely written and shows your tenderness well. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you everyone for your responses to this poem to a poet whom I would like to know better, but even though I know little of her life, Maureen has touched my heart with her poetry and here she is again, whipping out a thank you poem as easy as can be.I am so glad you liked my poem, Maureen. Take care Love Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh how I like to see the dream when Wonder here touches Moonbeam see Santos astride her white white horse she's written wonderfully of Maureen of course. Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
very sweet Sunshine..just had to say that ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I just love the way the love flows around these gentle walls ... hugs to you both, dear Liz and Maureen! Beautiful poem Liz!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, your thoughts are very beautiful, but if I'm going to be astride a white horse, I'm hangin' on to Lizzie, cause I can't ride worth a hoot. I'll just fly along with my angel wings. Thank you Sunshine and Kit Liz |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
that's nice, Liz.. a lovely tribute, to a lovely poet.. Love, Lynne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Liz, this was lovely, you expressed what I'm sure we all feel, a blessing from Maureen's heartfelt poetry. Kathleen |
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