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Wish Upon A Star
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Wish Upon A Star |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Wish Upon a StarHere I stand as I look up At the big star filled sky I smile softly remembering All the things that I wanted When I was a little kid I would wish for many things A puppy dog, doll, or toys were All the things that I wanted A few years passed by I wished for other things Pass a test, to have a date were All things that I wanted And still more years passed Again I wished on my star To have my true love, that was All the things that I wanted And now as I look up With your love in my heart And I realize I have All the things I that I wanted |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. Awesome. Loved the ending. Keep it up.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Xeonox - I'm glad you stopped in to read Thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals, So many thoughts and memories to wish upon a star. A star in the sky, Would you ever come by? And touch my aching heart, While we are so apart? Thank you rosepetals, I am very glad that I stopped by for this one. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Rose, a lovely poem beautiful thoughts, "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill - Again, thank you for your wondeful compliments Brian - I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to stop in and read |
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