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The fear of losing a best friend.
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The fear of losing a best friend. |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
This is only the second thing I have written in my life. I have a best friend that means the world to me, and they have inspired me to write this. They have also made me feel alive and young again. I hope you like it. If you like it let me know and I will post the first thing I wrote. David D. MY BIGGEST FEAR I am not afraid to die, however I cannot lie, my biggest fear is of you. I just don't know what i would do, if you were to forget all about me. It is something I don't even want to think, but when I sit here in the dark and begin to drink, I have thought of you forgetting about me. That is a day I never want to see, and pray for it never to arrive. I will never forget you or your touch, but for you to forget I fear so much. I will never forget your eyes or your kiss, but it is something that I will always miss, if you were to walk away and never look back. I only fear the loss of my true friend, and hope that this will never end. I close my eyes and ask God not to let you forget, but if you do I would only have one regret, that I did not die first. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi, and welcome to passion's .....Check your email for a special greeting  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Now thats what I call being a best friend. Your friend must be honored to have such a poem written after them. Post the other poem as well. Welcome to PassionsRonil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hi there David, Welcome to our little home, I truly enjoyed your first post and I really hope you put your other poem in here for us to share. You friend is very lucky. Linda M. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions David...you will enjoy it here...this poem is a good start...wonderful account of the value and preciousness of a good friend. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Beautiful David and yes it would be nice to see the other poem also Welcome...you will find such warmth and support here ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
IF we like it? geez man that was great! ...nice entrance! Tony |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
Thanks for all the replies. Makes me feel good to know others like it. I forwarded the post to the friend that inspires me. They were impressed. Thanx. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey David welcome to Passions...please do post the other this is great< !signature--> never say never [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Welcome David, now that you are here you will never want to leave!! Great poem, I am glad you have someone that inspires you! Jenn E |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
well first off welcome to passions...heheh i like your work...hehe Nik  i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome to Passions, David... This is a very touching poem.. Being aware of our feelings is soooo important, as we have a tendency in our lives to make our greatest fears come true... Check your mailbox for a special greeting..  |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
what an insightful poem... I know the feeling well, as do a lot of people I would believe. you captured the feeling well. nice job, and welcome. "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
David, What a good caring friend you are! I can't wait to read more! Welcome to Passions rosepetals |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
thoroughly enjoyed this awesome poem Welcome to Passions David Rex |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Hello David, This was a hard poem to write I think. Many emotions to keep in control while you put on paper (or computer screen) thoughts about these emotions. Myself...I would not burden these emotions with the limitations of rhyming. They need to be free. I do mean FREE. Never encumber an emotion. I applaud your work in rhyming this. Robert < !signature--> if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. [This message has been edited by RobertB (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This may only be your second, but I hope it's not your last I look forward to seeing all of your poems to come. So get writing ! |
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