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The Hours (For all of us poets)
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The Hours (For all of us poets) |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
The hours of the night pass my window like theives, who come to prance outside to laugh and amuse themselves with me. They stare into my solice attempting to shackel my mind, so they can have what lays my sacred completion I keep inside. Another price that I must pay to stand witness of hours pain, as paper and pen shall meet and the hours shall have what they seek. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
And penned so perfectly my friend. You have said much with few words. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Michael, in this poem you've given time (the "hours") a dark and ulterior motive...an interesting perspective. I enjoyed it! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So true Michael, you have definetly been there and done that...pardon the modern cliche....great work, there's a lot said here in a few lines.. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Michael-Tis true...within the pen and paper comes the passing of time As we all sit and write looking for that perfect verse of rhyme Your words have said it... truer words were never spoken Please accept my smile I give you...though it is only a small token WONDERFUL WORDS MICHAEL.......  [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you can do this when you HAVE a muse  ( i can almost remeber) lol very cool poem MG... love the dark cryptic edge to it... jm |
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