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lburn158
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2000-08-06 01:29 AM


I let you go tonight,
I finally realized I was worth more.
I can't believe I ever let you take
the most important part of me...
myself.
I did all I could,
I gave and I gave.
How dare I put you on a pedistol,
When you are the biggest coward I know.
You want face up to nothing, not even
your ownself.
And tonight I realized that I
am worth awhole lot more.
I can still gone without you, just as I did
before you.
Anything is better than having you bring me down.
The only thing that you ever did for me,
was helped me to realize that I am much stronger, and anyone like does not deserve me,
especially you.

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Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
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1 posted 2000-08-06 01:36 AM


A truly grand sentiment expressed in a very heartfelt way. The only problem i have is with some of the spelling..but i am too picky about small details...



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



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