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An angel In disguise
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An angel In disguise |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Dedicated To friends all over for this day An angel in disguise It's hard enough to go though life And what if I should be alone In times of pain and hurt and more I simply would just dig inside To find more meaning to my being And always I would feel this hand Unseen sometimes still I could sense A presence of a higher strength That picked me up and held me high My feet on ground I still could fly And when I cry you'll dry my tears So if I stumble and ever fall You'll be there each time I call My choicest dreams and wishes I'm not alone you'll see them through There are angel's and then again That angel in disguise could only be friend. [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
AVANTI.... You never know what disguise an angel might be in!!! I really liked reading this. It was full of hope and strength. Really nice work here!< !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thank you for reading me sunny! and your signature is sweet I know what you mean when you say "you never know what could be in disguise" thanx again And HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And always I would feel this hand Unseen sometimes still I could sense A presence of a higher strength That picked me up and held me high My feet on ground I still could fly And when I cry you'll dry my tears So if I stumble and ever fall You'll be there each time I call =============== Happy Friendship Day to you my poetic pal.. how very nice to see ya posting... wonderful poem of hope and light... uplifting words take care wise-poet jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Thank you Janet for reading me as always I'm  you liked itsee you around and hope you have a wonderful day If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Tess Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288Australia |
A perfect poem for friendship day. I'm sure we all know some angels in disguise  "A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become porcelain." --Mildred W. St |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The truth shows eventually and the truth is.. you are an angel in disguise deep down inside..you are the truth within that is willing to take help from the pure spirit that exists there.....this is just another angle to look at such a wonderful poem... my opinion |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thanx so much Tess I agree with you and ethome you are very kind you've made my day If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
AVANTI, What a lovely and uplifting poem I know sooo many people who are my angels and have been my strength. You couldn't have expressed it better rosepetals25 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
more I simply would just dig inside To find more meaning to my being And always I would feel this hand Unseen sometimes still I could sense A presence of a higher strength That picked me up and held me high A lovely thought, I met my angels. It is true you never what form they might take. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Thank you so much for reading me rosepetal and Brian. Glad you liked it it means a lot when people can feel the words I write If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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