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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-08-06 12:40 PM



I look at you laying in
front of the fire,
I get filled
With an outburst of desire.
I want to kiss
your soft lips again,
I remember
What you said back then.
How you thought I was so
strong,
To kiss you without warning
How you thought we belong.
The way you talked with
such ease,
Holding me
Prepared to please.
The way you held
my hand,
Eager to deliver
And kind of demand.
You asked me why I
chose you,
And I blushed,
I knew I couldnt lie
to you.
I said it was your kind
and caring ways,
How I had thought of you,
And I still would in the
coming days.


© Copyright 2000 Cherie - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-06 12:44 PM


Hi Beth....
           I really like this one.....it's
        tender and easy on the heart......
             Very nicely done, as always!!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-06 12:46 PM


very sensual and romantic.. enjoyed reading
Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
3 posted 2000-08-06 12:54 PM


~Sunny,
Thankyou so much.
Im glad you liked it~

~Rosebud,
Thankyou deeply~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-08-06 01:03 AM


Really soft sensuality here Beth.....loved it much.
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
5 posted 2000-08-06 02:04 AM


woo-hoo titania (giggle)!
looks like youve been sprinklin that fairy dust again! hahah...this IS very sensual...loved it!

Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
6 posted 2000-08-06 02:59 AM


~Mark,
Thankyou dearly.
I was hoping I'd get
To hear from you!~

~Dawn,
Oh, I have been doing
nothing but that hahaha
Thanks for your reply~

Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
7 posted 2000-08-06 07:47 AM


This was so soft and tender.  

"A clay pot sitting in the sun will always be a clay pot. It
has to go through the white heat of the furnace to become
porcelain."
--Mildred W. St

Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
8 posted 2000-08-06 08:36 AM


~Tess,
Thankyou so much
for reading~

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