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Whate'er it seems
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Whate'er it seems |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Life, a circle where three veins meet in Peace, a dream a waking, walk of life to be called whate’er it seems Can life be thought it intertwines blood of brothers yours and mine somewhere fleeting one heart’s beating: “Love is all we hope to find” then love will hurt and peace it fails one thing to you Faith prevails love, faith, peace, or other we want God to bless? all I can say from my heart brother is Yes… |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Walty... this is fantastic! YES!!! it is  Well done! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Walt, you are DEEP. Fantastic pen you're holding these days! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Really nice one here! I love the last verse.. you've been getting the right inspiration!  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanky maree and sen yuh i was goin thru the ole cd collection pullin out the ole peace love and happinesss stuff and this is what i got outta it yuh yuh .. pdv thanx for lendin an ear and lettin me know the last stanza wasnt corny to you as i was afraid of yuh yuh |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Complex simplicity, Walt...this is excellent ~ ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Walt, you are reaching a pinnacle of depth in thoughts... and the profoundity in your most recent poems (there are many of them) is so far reaching... and thought-provoking that I am just trying to figure out what will be the next one and when will it be.... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Oh, my friend ..... this is a beautiful piece. 'Can life be thought it intertwines blood of brothers yours and mine somewhere fleeting one heart’s beating: “Love is all we hope to find”' Such truths are evident to those who search with open hearts. 'love, faith, peace, or other we want God to bless? all I can say from my heart brother is Yes…' A magnitude of heart on display. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
meadowmuse, sudhir and marge thanky im tryin yuh glad yuh noticed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Walt, this is a very thought provoking poem. And it flows beautifully. Catalinamoon |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I am IMPRESSED... mightily mightily. love, faith, peace, or other we want God to bless? all I can say from my heart brother is Yes wow...Waltee...you had some deep little journeys here hey? K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn, and remembered that it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From J |
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