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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
An enigma, am I- a mystery, a puzzle, putting my own pieces together. Not a 25 piece, ages 3-5 puzzle either. No, this puzzle has thousands of intricate pieces... Many different shades and hues, each piece unlike another. Putting together this puzzle is challenging at best and trying to say the least, requiring my complete concentration... But I think the finished product in all its glory will be well worth the effort. For I know that the end picture will be of rainbows and sunshine... I can already see rays of light showing through, as I'm interlocking the pieces of me. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VaporousOne~ How lovely are the hues of your rainbow. A finished puzzle is a work of art. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, yes......this is really, really good!! The more I think about it, after reading, the more I realize that our lives really are like puzzles! I like the way you think!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I really liked this!!!! As Sunny said I like the way you think...~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I enjoyed this, too. Your puzzle metaphor is splendid, and so appropriate! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like the aspect of putting the puzzle together and achieving positive results. This is very well done ...I agree with you and the others....life is a puzzle that eventually gets pieced together. |
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BamaPoet Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 34Dothan, AL USA |
Hello! Life is a puzzle...thousands of pieces...sometimes it takes an entire lifetime to complete this puzzle, then at other times, pieces can get lost along the way. "If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with." |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
oh how well i know the feeling of being in pieces...like fitting square pegs in round holes...but sooner or later it will all come together...good write here never say never |
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Vaporous One Junior Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 35 |
Thanks everyone, for all your kind words. I'm glad you could relate.  |
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