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Open Poetry #9

Ponderings

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2000-08-05 07:08 PM

Across the winds of once that was,
...whispered memories,
Soothing balm of times gone by,
...unto the soul, heartsease.

Venus shines her light above,
...'tis written in the stars,
What we are is what we were,
...enscribed in life's memoires.

I gaze within for suckling babe,
...I wonder what he'd see,
I wonder if he'd recognize,
...the man I've come to be.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-08-05 07:42 PM

Mike...
       This expressed some of the things
      I've often thought about.....you have
      put those thoughts into words and done
      it extremely well.........
       "What we are is what we were....

           and what shall we become?

I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-08-05 07:45 PM

Profound ponderings, Mike. Very lovely poem!

Denise

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-08-05 08:00 PM

MIke very interesting poem...I liked it liked it a lot.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-08-05 09:39 PM

Your reflective mood translates well, my friend. What one might see from whence one came... ponderings, indeed.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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