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Kyle aka Huck
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since 2000-07-16
Posts 63
Linn, MO USA

0 posted 2000-08-05 06:30 PM


First comes my girlfriend Jess,
She's shy nontheless.
Then comes my mom,
Shes just da bomb.
Daddy comes next in line,
His height STILL exceeds mine.
Now it's my brother's turn,
In his eyes passion does burn.
My four dogs have a part in this too,
But right now they dont know what to do.
Next is my iguana whos eyes and name are both Amber,
Look out for her tail DON'T tamper.
Next is all my friends around the globe,
Flicker together as one like a light called strobe.
Now how bout the house I live in,
It's not much but it's not a trash bin.
The car I drive is a luxury,
But the thrill is that of a sting from a bee.
Lastly is for the teaches who have taught me,
I wrote this in gold,
So all of you may see,
How these 10 things,
Make up MY reality.
These are the ten special things in my life.


© Copyright 2000 Kyle Finn - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-05 08:23 PM


Hi Kyle aka Huck...

            This was wonderful!! It sounds
    like you have a full life and are
    enjoying every minute of it!! That is
    so cool........too many people forget to
    appreciate what they have......
          This was great.....
          I hope to read more from you!!
  


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2000-08-05 08:31 PM


Hey there Huck - gotta agree with Sunny1...sounds like you're loving it.
Good for you!  Nice piece, too.

jwesley

Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-08-05 09:24 PM


Kyle~
So YOU !
Enjoyed the read.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2000-08-07 02:01 AM


second place huh? at least Im in front of the dogs LOL

never say never

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2000-08-07 02:07 AM


ten wonderful things and ten different wonderful ways to explain them as good as I've read.........would you have a mother named Paula who is also a very sweet loving poet???
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