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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-08-05 01:30 PM


       Hors d'oeuvre anyone

An elite of our avant-garde
Dances cajole on knobby knees      
Grousing whimsy by the yard.

A cherub grin, lock sets his chin
Illicit white blows the breeze
Pouring vocal hemlock gin.

He suffers from vis-a-vis
A side effect of knobby knees
A product of his large testes.
  
Consternation pours out the lot
Illusions of his smoking pot.
Broiled hors d'oeuvre served mostly hot.


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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-08-05 01:36 PM


Seymour..
         This conjures up all kinds of
         possibilities in my head!!!
         My favorite line had to be:

      "..illusions of his smoking pot.."

         (Not to be taken out of context,
                   of course!!)

             This is perfect......


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2000-08-05 02:51 PM


Sunny1,
Glad your keeping the hors d'oeuvres hot.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-08-05 04:13 PM


what ever your smokin...  I want some ...
(poetically speaking of course)  
WAY COOL Sy-guy..
where do you come up with this vocabulary coolness...
I'll take an order to go...
later-smokin'Sy-gator
jm

menage a demideux
Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 32

4 posted 2000-08-05 04:29 PM


est-ce que je pourrais être votre apéritif?

theez iz an awesome morceau de poésie!!  

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-08-05 09:09 PM


Janet,
Type it out, roll it up, and light it, then take a puff. Later gator.

Menage a demideux,
I'm going to have to get me a french dictionary. *L*

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