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.......NEVER say Goodbye.......
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.......NEVER say Goodbye....... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Hold me for tonight.. I know that you can't stay.. I know, for us, there's no forever.. only for today.. Don't try to make it right.. There's no more words to say.. This love we share is now, or never.. So, take my breath away...... Whisper in my ear.. But never tell me lies.. I know the truth is hard to take.. It comes with no disguise.. The path we chose is clear.. We walk with open eyes.. And everything's for love's sweet sake.. will be until it dies...... Take me to your soul.. Set our spirits free.. Tonight on wings of love's desire.. We'll reach eternity.. Your touch has made me whole.. A fire burns in me.. And no one else can quench the flame.. I'm lost within it's heat...... With the break of day.. From loving arms you'll rise.. But there's no pleading from my heart.. Though deep inside I cry.. There's nothing left to say.. I look into your eyes.. Each night we share must end this way.. We never say goodbye...... [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Oh ..... I like it - I like it - I like it ! 'Take me to your soul.. Set our spirits free.. Tonight on wings of love's desire.. We'll reach eternity..' Yep ..... I like it !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marge... Thank you so much, and I'm always glad to see you!! This one wrote itself, along with it's own melody. Thank you again!!< !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, I'm hooked...you're a romantic, like myself. This is truly a wonderful poem. Very well done. Auguste |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Auguste... I confess!! (Once a romantic, always a romantic!) I knew you were from the first reading of your work...... Thank you for reading this, and it's always good to hear from you!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"Take me to your soul set our spirits free Tonight on wings of loves desire We'll reach eternity Your touch has made me whole A fire burns in me And no one else can quench the flame I'm lost within it's heat." Romance, ah I have so much to learn from you romantics! Sunny youre awesome, its that simple! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
poutprincess... I have often said the very same things about your beautiful thoughts!! You are truly a romantic and I do believe from what I have read on this site, that all poets have romance in their souls....... How else could we all express our feelings? Thank you, my friend, and I'm so glad that you liked this! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny.... Everything that I read, Everything that I see, I'll always read those poems, As long as it's from thee. You are indeed a romantic, and you know that I love your poems. Thanks for sharing with little ole me. And fried chicken with all the fixings, two bottles of wine - one red, and one white would do. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunny1, I must agree, I love the romance in this one, though sad. Its so true, all poets have romance in their soul, and you've showen you do. Parker |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill... I will always share with lil' ol' you, y'all. Tell me, are you from the South?? I'm glad you like this one....beings you are the romantic you are, I thought you might!!!!! Thank you, and don't forget to bring the corkscrew!!!!!!!!!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Parker... Nice to meet you, and I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I agree, it is a bittersweet thing, sort of melancholy. Thank you so much for reading it!!< !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
oh, how did you know.......... going through a bit of this, and I never want to say good bye to her........... wonderfull writing......... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hold me for tonight.. I know that you can't stay.. I know, for us, there's no forever.. only for today.. Don't try to make it right.. There's no more words to say.. This love we share is now, or never.. So, take my breath away...... Took the breath right out of me it did. I must learn to breath when I feel the anxiety setting in. This one is so romantic and so "YOU". Wonderful.....just wonderful. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Michael... The indecision is the hard part, I know, and if you are the first one to say goodbye..well, usually you end up asking yourself if you did the right thing. The only thing I can say is: Communication....talk to her, my bet is that she'll talk to you, and then you can both find out where you stand...share your heart with her.... (that's why you are a poet!!!) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Mark... Now, now...take a deep breath, then exhale slowly...you'll be fine!!!! You are such a kidder!! Thank you for the reply, my friend, (feeling better now??)< !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So who told you so much about my life that you could write this one??? Blows me away, sunny. It's got the words, the melody and the message...a complete package!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Take me to your soul...set our spirits free"...my, what a world in just a few words. Beautiul piece, my friend. jwesley |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Balladeer, You caught me reading your thoughts again!!!! Seriously, my 'deer' friend, I really am glad you felt this as you read it....that's what I intended, as so many of us have gone through what I call the 'yo-yo' love experience! I'm in the process of putting this to a sequence for recording. Keep your fingers crossed, ok? (and thank you so very much!!) I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi jwesley.... I appreciate your very nice reply, and am glad that you liked this one! Thank you very much!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sunny, How sweet and beautiful this is! I love it rosepetals25 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25... I'm glad I could put a sweet smile on your face with these simple words. That means a lot to me, just getting your reply! .......Thank you....... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
yep... a package ... interesting concept... of words defining futility and bliss....what a combination, eh? nice work, missy....very fine writing.... "nice work if you can get it"... whoops, pardon me... a little gershwin trapped in my inner ear... and you have inspired my muse... below.... thank you *smile* ________________ ~ never say never ~ (by doreen) gershwin must be trapped, my friend, within my inner ear and maybe lines that you have written echo me in tear.... i lean to him and listen to his lyric and intent... and then i re-evaluate the way my time is spent. whose words are these, the man has asked, and i, in honest voice, quick tell him that the words are mine, since i am not his choice. there is no way to lie because i simply don't know how, yet all my lost imagining brings sweat upon my brow. thank you, my friend, for sharing lines with blatant truth, so clear -- yes! - with my sanction quite confused, i'm glad that i could hear. ~ doreen ~ ____________________________ .... you are a fine writer Sunny1! thank you for inspiring me and being tolerant of my posting my verse to accompany your very fine poetry. [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
charming poem... very well written... I personally love romantic ones too If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny, WOW, You've taken my breathe away. This is so romantic and sensual. Brilliant work as usual. Beth~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunny... the only thing I can think to say is that, this is a beautiful work of poetic art, my how you have captured the hopelessness of such a never ending sensual love. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
doreen.... Your additions are always most welcome wherever I am, as I am a great fan of your talent!! I thank you for your kind reply!! AVANTI....Yes, I love the romance, also.. I thank you for reading and I am happy that you liked!! Beth....It's always a pleasure to see your reply!! Thank you so much!!!! ethome....I guess love can be hopeless, but sometimes we just can't get that through our heads, and we just keep hanging on! Thank you...... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sunny... I really don't know if it's proper to reply twice to the same poem, but well, maybe no one will mind. Every time I read this I'm touched by your words. I've printed this out, and perhaps will write a tune for it. Actually, I was born and raised in New York state, but my home is now in Virginia. I work in Iowa at the present time. Just returned to the guitar after many moons away from it. Bought a new one Sat, and it will be here in two weeks, I hope. One corkscrew coming up!!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Whoops, just me again. Where did that beautiful photo go? Are you going to post another I hope. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Bill... No, I really don't think anyone will mind a 2nd post....I know I certainly don't!!! I am so glad, really, that you like this poem...the words came from so far down inside, that it almost hurt to write it. Yes, that would be wonderful to have your music put to this!! I hope your new guitar works out for you. Aha!!! I can spot a Southern boy a mile off.....(even if he is a transplant.....my mother was from Kentucky.) My picture looked a bit out of whack to me, so I downloaded a fresh copy, and hopefully it will be back on one of these days!! < !signature--> I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
WOW,LOVED EVERY LINE YOU WORTE IT KEEP IT UP |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
heh.. ya I think WOW says about it all!! Simply amazing!! ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi vandana... I thank you, and glad I could give you a smile today!!!! Hi LilOnE... I like the word 'WOW'!!!!!!!!! Thank you for reading!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny--Perfectly penned...the feeling the rhythm...would make a wonderful song...You can write, girl!!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Martie... Thank you so much, and yes... this one screamed out "I'm a song", from the moment of it's birth!!! So glad you stopped by!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunny1-This was sooo beautiful, really got through to me and I could feel your words. Very nicely done. |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
This was so romantic and beautiful! It really hit home with me as I'm going through something similar. Beautifully written! Loved it! kat |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very insightful words! Corinne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've written something very special here. Wonderful poem! Liz |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Gemini... I thank you, and also am glad that you enjoyed this!! Kat... As you can see, my friend, you are not alone in this circumstance, or this house!! Thank you, and I wish you the best, also..... Corinne...Hello, and thank you...yes, this one came from experience, & insight Liz...I appreciate your compliment, and it will be made into a special song. Thank you so very much! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, this expressed my feelings so well, thank you for writing it. Perfect poem about a love that is painful, yet so very strong and real. awesome. Catalinamoon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL Sunny1 I see you are no longer my private treasure...this is wonderful...i especially like...this love we share is now or never so take my breath away never say never |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
catalinamoon... I thank you so much, and I truly agree about how painful love can be....and it doesn't seem to matter even if you change partners!!! Paula... Hi, girl......thank you for coming by....I was just trying to remember who did the song that had the line... 'take my breath away.......' Well, I was so glad to see your reply....drop me a line... I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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