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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-05 03:54 AM




In The Palm Of My Hand


I reach up to the sky to hold a star
For every time that you make me smile.
I am gathering them, the entire night sky,
Filled with lights, strewn forever and a mile.

If I could hold them all in the palm of my hand
And feel the burn in my heart,
I'd never be sad, nor lonely at all.
Feelings captured, we'd never seem apart.

In all these stars, are the twinkling of eyes
Of yours when I look up above.
Oh these heavens are swirling, just from my thoughts
And these feelings I'm having, my love.

If a star would then fall with each thought that I have
When you come into my mind,
The sky would soon empty and dark would appear.
In the palm of my hand, You, I'd find.

Maureen

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[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-05-2000).]

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poutprincess
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1 posted 2000-08-05 05:30 AM


this is Incredibly romantic!! *sigh*

Michael G
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2 posted 2000-08-05 05:47 AM


aaaawwww, so sweet............. nice to read....
Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-08-05 05:49 AM


Romantic and tender.....
ethome
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4 posted 2000-08-05 06:32 AM


Maureen you are just a freshwater spring of romantic words and moods....Write on dear girl.
MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-05 07:06 AM


princess...sometimes I think you are my biggest fan
~~soft hugs and thanks  
always a ~~smile for you
Maureen

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-08-05 02:10 PM


thank you Michael, I appreciate the awwwww...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-05 10:38 PM


Mark...romantic and tender..all the time..that's me unless that moon becomes full then all bets are off
~~softly smiling a thank you
Maureen

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-08-05 10:55 PM


E....a freshwater spring....ah sounds so lovely
~~soft thanks
M

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