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Firestorm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It started as a tiny spark, Landing in an empty heart, Left shattered and dry by betrayal. Fanned by the breath of a new lovers kiss It grows brighter and hotter Til it rages like a wildfire out of control Cleansing in its heat. Consuming past hurts in a firestorm of passion, Then settles in for that long slow burn Of forever. never say never |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh Paula, this *sizzles*.........how warm and intense your heart must be! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Then settles in for that long slow burn Of forever. Here is wishing for you that long slow burn for your forver...very passionate.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great way to sum up the elements of true love Paula and you did it in such a fine fashion with wonderful pictures. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula.... this one is Hot--Hot--Hot!!!!! I always enjoy a good fire, and this is really Good!!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Paula, a lovely poem. May the fire continue to burn brightly. really enjoyed the poem. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Wow !  Sounds like a flash-over to me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh i do so love a poetic slow burn... excellent writing and metaphor use here paula... nothing like a little smoke in the forums take care jm |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wow Paula, I'm hot, hot, hot to go. Whoa, more like that and smokem cookem on the grill. Nicely done with fire. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Paula, This just scorches with passion and heartfelt emotion. The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
poutprincess...yeah lol...I hope I have a warm heart. Mark...Im working on it. ethome...I can always count on you to give me an ego boost...thanks Sunny1...girl thanks you always make me feel good Brian..thanks guy Marge...WOW love the graphic...and your hot words JM...it just took a little inspiration Bill...sounds like a bonfire to me Jeff...it is (PTNLS) never say never |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Amazing work, Paula.... lost my breath on that one...(gasping now) regards, sudhir |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sudhir...thank you...here need soem water LOL never say never |
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