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HASSAN_ALI
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since 2000-08-04
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Fairfield, Ca. USA

0 posted 2000-08-05 02:11 AM



Lord please give me my daughter
that's what I want and need
so for 9 months me and Rebecca
will take care of and feed.
For 9 months wondering what she looks like,
laying next to my wifes tummy listening every night
asking my wife every few minutes
if she feeling alright
then my baby says " honey, tonight is the night"
So I wake up Lil' Rob and say your sisters coming
I help him put on his clothes
and calling people
so i'm doin a lot of running.
I got Lil' Rob in the car, Rebecca's clothes
then I call the doctor
he said he'll meet me there
so out the door I slowly walk her.
We got in the car with no problem
and to the hospital the same
I had to hurry
I could see my boo in pain.
Hours in the delivery room
my baby was finally born
but my boo...
was all torn.
My Aunt and my sisters
to the nursery follow me,
there is Tatiyana Latrece Love Ali.

This poem is dedicated to my daughter that will hopefully soon be conceived.



© Copyright 2000 Hassan Ali - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-08-05 10:49 AM


This wonderfully sentimental poem needs to come back around for another lap... Welcome to Passions - You'll love it here - check your email for a special greeting
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2 posted 2000-08-06 04:47 AM


You have written it so well. I am sure your daughter will enjoy it when she is able to read it. Welcome to Passions!

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

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