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TheBlindMan
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 20
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 2000-08-05 12:33 PM



We men seem so often,  not to be able to explain to the women we love, "why we love them"! They need to hear it in a way a woman can understand. I have found myself at a point where I may just be able to reach the one love of my life I need to not let go of. Her challenge to me is to explain "why I love her". There are so many reasons, it is difficult to know just which ones she needs to hear.
  My hope and request is for those women who have provided me with so much support and caring, here in this special place, to assist me one more time in helping me discover those things which are most important to the heart I have dedicated my life to.
Only those wonderful women who have provided so many wonderful pictures here are the ones I trust with such an important request.
In advance, Thank you so much,
TheBlindMan

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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
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1 posted 2000-08-05 02:55 AM


I have no idea what you mean by any of this except to maybe tell you in verse  how I would like it to be told to me
I am only taking the time tonight to do this for you as it is late here and I am off my  clock  for some reason and am in need of sleep but since you are the first to gain my attention I write this for you

Why Do You Love Me

I am often caught awake in my sleep
wondering why, wondering deep.
What is it that makes you love me so?
Is it the littlest things, I need this to know.
For it's hard to believe, that there are many parts of
that you want to share, that you want to love.
Is it the way I tilt my head, when I smile,
when I gaze in your eyes, rest in yours for awhile?
Do you love when I take my small gentle hands
and brush them against you, don't you understand
that the tiniest  touches that spring from my heart
rise in me feelings that I want to impart?
Do you feel that way, does it matter to you...
when I'm messed up some mornings, or a little bit blue?
I know why I love and what means most to me.
Can you express those in eyes, through my soul that you see?
Can you feel my heart beating when I'm holding you near
Do you love it's fast rhythm,  does it bring you to tear,
Knowing how much my heart aches whenever you leave
Why do we love each ...It's because we believe....

Maureen

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-08-05 10:38 AM


BlindMan....
            Love is a not really something
   that one can put into words....it's pure
   emotion, and feeling, and giving.
            I know what you're asking, and
   I know the question she is asking, as I
   have asked it myself. But there is so
   much involved in loving someone and as
   every individual is just that...unique,
   there are a billion ways for 2 people to
   answer that question in their own set of
   circumstances.
            I'm just going to tell you how
   I feel about it, as a woman, and this is
   just my idea...ok? When it comes to love,
   I like to be shown, in simple ways how
   he feels. Words are nice, and sometimes
   all it takes, but in the beginning of new
   love...well, I like walks in the moonlight
   and sitting by the fire. A hand-picked
   bouquet of wildflowers, and a surprise
   picnic by a lake with food that he fixed
   for the 2 of us. I like the simple and
   romantic things, that don't cost a lot...
       That's how I would like someone to
   say they loved me.....just show me.
            I hope this may help you some.
   I think most women would rather be shown
   than told.  And the rest is up to your
   own imagination. Take your time, talk a
   lot, and get to know her. Then you will
   find more ways to show her, and seeing
   really is believing!!!!


I have but one goal in
life.........
To make you smile!
~~ Sunny ~~


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