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Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
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Washington...

0 posted 2000-08-04 11:24 PM




Serenity tickles my fingertips
I am blanketed by tranquility
love is my new scent
and I am inundated

Your eyes close
opening to another world
I miss you just now
wanting to be with you always

I kiss your sleeping skin
because I can’t help it
my hands fill with your heat
melting against your flesh

I still feel you
inside me and around me
as your heart murmurs
lullabies against my cheek

Your toes encircle mine
holding them in your dreams
“I love you” escapes my lips
captured by your hair...


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I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan




[This message has been edited by Breathe~ (edited 08-04-2000).]

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doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-08-04 11:33 PM


lovely, romantic... captivating... your screen name suits your writing well...

enjoyed  

Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
Washington...
2 posted 2000-08-05 03:01 AM


Thank you doreen peri...that was one of the kindest responses I have had...No one has commented on my name before... )

Thank you again...


I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-08-05 09:31 AM


Breathe~
Nice to see you in here.
This is a lovely render of the heart.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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