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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-08-04 10:59 PM


Knowing

Adapted, changed
soul remains

Lost, found
soul renown

hidden key
found in me

reflect you
given clues

strikes me
uncertain

behind the
curtains

soul repels
given hell

BUT

souls rejoice
given choice.

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
4 August 2000


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Jenn E
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1 posted 2000-08-04 11:14 PM


I liked it.......my fav is the end..
souls rejoice given choice......Great read.  
Jenn E

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-08-04 11:18 PM


Thank you Jenn! I'm looking for your works!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-08-04 11:31 PM


how do YOU do it??? that's what I'd like to know.....

wish i could write so succinctly... this is a fine piece of writing ... so few words say soooooo so much.... god bless and thank you for a wonderful read

Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-08-04 11:36 PM


Doreen...I'll trade a page if YOU trade a page!!!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-02 07:47 PM


neat style...love this type of write from you
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2008-03-10 10:49 PM




ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

I believe I found what I was looking for!

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