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'rowboat love'
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'rowboat love' |
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guiliano New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8new york city |
rowboat love.... "he said tonight he was taking me out, I just didn't know which way.................." we heard the zenith squeak as we pushed away from what we never knew to feel this day our skin bumped with the oars, clumsy first dance oh, hollow marble sweet stance, and they're off candied picture mirrored, speechless, breathless wind in, breathless wind out of my jellied hair....nature I am yours, see me I flashback to 'I got the wind knocked out of me' of rough- housing days young............ ...........and the man before me, yes, this man, life has knocked this man out of me, this beautifully awesome lake, his wild bright eyes....his unique awkward passions of fiery........ .......and if only she could forgive me of the days lost to grind worlds chores to dust to hold back the invisible seas of doubts .......oh, but is it worth to sell the innocence we all dreamed as young, to rise a life sworn and to find only to silence it by making noise looking for what we dreamed of...................... "We spent the whole time in peaceful silence, The scenery was beautiful. We both had a nice time." "Takes it easy, baby Take it as it comes Don't move too fast And you want your love to last Oh, you've been movin' much too fast"=(The Doors) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW----you have started with a beauty. Welcome to the Passions family. If this is what we can expect then we are fortunate indeed. Great write.  |
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