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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-08-04 08:22 PM



All My Life



All my life I’ve been waiting for someone
To walk in the summer rain with
To find  someone to talk with
To laugh at goofy jokes with
To cuddle late at night with
To eat cotton candy with
To run and play with
I have been waiting for some one
To share all my sorrows with
To discuss life plans with
To spend my life with
To fall in love with
To grow old with
My whole life
I have been
Waiting
For
u


© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-08-04 09:14 PM


This is sweet, Rosepetals!

Denise

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-08-05 02:40 AM


Denise - Thank you for stopping in to read  
poutprincess
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3 posted 2000-08-05 05:10 AM


this is very nice....good to know im not the only one who has been waiting!
ethome
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4 posted 2000-08-05 06:36 AM


Rosepetals....it's going to happen because it is life and that's what it's all about.... Patience is the virtue needed....Wonderful shaped poem with beautiful yearning lines.
Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-08-05 06:41 AM


Wonderful poem and with the extra gift of design as well...nice to see you plunging in and gracing us with your works.
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-08-05 01:22 PM


RosePetals~

You just have to know how much I enjoyed reading this.
The visual was an enhancement to lovely thoughts !
~*Marge*~


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T McCoy
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7 posted 2000-08-05 04:57 PM


rp25...this is so unique and so expressive...
great writing...very cool...

Tony  

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8 posted 2000-08-05 05:29 PM


poutprincess - I'm glad to say I'm not waiting anymore..hehe.  I have a wonderful man that I adore. It was worth the wait though  

ethome - Thank you for your kind words I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Mark - I'm glad you stopped in to read it  


rosepetals25
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9 posted 2000-08-05 05:31 PM


Marge - Thank you so much   I love reading your poetry, so knowing you enjoy mine is a wonderful thing to know   I'm glad you liked it.

Tony - Thank you for the nice words   I'm glad you liked it  

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